10 to 16 lines
no d/r
no feedin
no bitin
no crew votes
Must spit now.......................

Check in why did u make another? 1................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................

checkin in also, it was a mistake man just spit in here, im gonna now within the hour yo!!!!!!I expect the same from you....

Use Ya Scalp For My Neck~Pendants, Concoction Of 'Killer Words' Don't 'Judge'.. But Deliver A 'Death~Sentence'
I Throw Punches So 'Hard', No Wonder They Say My Fists Are 'Wreck~In~Tense'

Better Reckon~Bitch, I'll Leave Him 'Shittin On Himself' Cuz Even He's Not 'Potty~Trained'
Vitals 'Madd Slow' Cuz I Left Ya Body~Chained To The 'Northern Slug' Of My 'Shottie~Maine'

God~He's~Lame, 'Spittin Personals' That 'Don't Exist' Like 'Ya Matchin~Syllables
My Laughins~Synical, Only 'Hard' Cuz You In A 'Body Cast' And Was Left 'Last~In~Critical'

I’m Skeptical That Anything You Spit Is Technical, You’re Like Crippled Bad Parents, Just Not Respect~able
And No Concert Stages Are Wheel Chair Accessible, Cuz My Punch'll Leave This 'Dead Beet' Just Like A 'Vegetable'

The Important~Thing~Is~This, This Poor~Kids~Spleen~Is~Ripped Leave A 'Cut' 'Down' In Ya Eye, Theres More~To~Seein~Diss ..9
My Merk~Scheme~Is~Sick…,You Claim To 'Crack Skulls' Cuz You Were Apart Of 'Aborted~Fetus……10

10lines………20mins

check it!!!!!!!!

Yo I cant stop yawning cuz this kids spit is so boring you couldnt elevate if you got up early in the morning,
I cant help snoring you got me so tired and warn and I cant keep interested in my morning glory.

Face it dude you might aswell live in ya basement cuz you so ugly and untalented you wont ever get a placement,
Even if ya tried youd be rejected and home sent cuz no good at anything get on ya knees and repent.

Ya flow smells off cuz its old and pungent thers no current moving your skill its not liquid its stagnent,
You suck worse than a old whore owing rent you might aswell join the streets working, as ya bent.

You cant keep up your no speedy gonzallez you'll be living in a chair a coach potato piss artitst,
You got no stomach for this you'll never make a chart list and ya chest is so flat ya slippin, ending up braless.

Im the extra largest keeping it real as I murk ya minds hardest ya overheated like a fan, disconnect and re-charge it,
You cant afford this another score against loose list, you aint a player your the smallest, im the ballest.

You think ya living the vida loca but you aint a crazy rapper more like a fake choaker,
So choak and roll over stop giving it all ya boaster cuz Ya rhymes aint shit under me like a coaster.

Thats it Ive had enough I got a feeling in my guts if this guy was squirril he still wouldnt have the nuts,
To hit me in da guts cuz his style is so weak they crumble at the struts and the only time you use ya head is when try ya head butts.

Its over son....................

ok this should be a good one.....good battle maine!!!!!!!!!

we needs votes uppin dis!!!!!!!!!...................................... .................................................. ............................

Fuckkkk ive nexer strechted that much woups....oh well good enougth........................................... .................................................. .....

DYNaMaTIC, i checked some of his shit out, trademark, multi's/punch, misex, he always does it well, and wit good flow...XL didn't match up to DYNa, basically...

Vote = .DYNaMaTIC.

'misex', i meant mixed, multi's and punches mixed through the bars.............................................. .................

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Vote Dynamatic

Better punches........flow and wordplay........i suggest you shorten your lines to about 10-12 words per and take out the ~~~ and you'll be pretty tight....XL nice verse but nothing really stood out

Thanks For The Vote.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...............................

Breakdown
Punches-kinda a tie, leaning towards dyn a bit
Flow-definately dyn, xl4's was very choppy at times.
Wordplay-dyn
multi's-dyn
creativity-even
Vote=dyn
good battle though and props to both
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vote this one up aswell guys dont let it lie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

honest votes returned but no d/r I WILL NOT vote for you just cuz you did for me................................................ .