You know the rules Checkin by 30 min

I guess i'll spit first!!Aight

Ayo

Open the doors, let the savage in "Hard rhymes begin"~Rap is in a state of distress Loc is the "medicine"~Amateurs, step off my profession
Every word's a lesson//1
Don't confuse emotion with aggression Lights low, my approach is deadly but slow~Professional, exceptional, in the dark we glow//2
Who ever acts clever never leaves the premises fully intact I'm the heavy weight, you're the feather~A firm grip of the microphone confirms my position
As a strong artist and adventurer//3
Soft rappers with your petty bullshit "GET LOST!"~Every word's a javelin delivered with "FORCE!" (of course)~This might be difficult for you to fathom
The ever lasting, long living~highly under-rated, high caliber~no nonsense style of attack is unstoppable, legendary character//4
What you do I already did, so stop the ego~You're weak anyway, what's the deal, what you bragin' for~If you could see what I see, you ain't an MC~What's your brain for, when what you're sayin' sounds empty
~I gave you time to prepare for the destruction that's about to begin
You makin' a record is a sin//5

Checkin...
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Umm First off you posted that shit WAY to quickly so I think it was bit but besides that you had like no punches in there, not tryin to sway but stating the obvious and now I'll spit

??bored ive been writin all day .................................................. ......................................andso on



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basically i pre wrote it but about like an hour ago...42069


LOC ReP PPPPPPPPPPZZZZZZZZZZZZZZz





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Vicious Thoughts have left your mind frame depleted, That verse didn't even diss me, it needs to be deleted//1
You don't diserve the name cannibus, deep down even you know you suck so you really should concede-in-us//2

0-1 record bitch you need some common sense, I think that shit you spit punched you! and left a major mental dent//3
you need to let your conecpts vent, they only kill you worse then what spits I've sent, In battles bitch you aint suppose to be a gent//4

This battle I set in time you will regret, Your a fuckin lord of shit don't worry that secret's well kept //5
Bitch I'll give you this, you spit quicker then a jet, but that shit don't matter when your battlein someone like me who's a lyrical vet//6

Havin you say "theres no place like home", like you wore "dorothy's slippers" but still bit a bullet of chrome//7
Since your merked I'll leave you alone but These vicious thoughts will be stuck in your head, the complexity has breakin your dome//8

fin

Uppin
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Upping!!!!!!
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Stop sleepin on dis shit yo Uppin...
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Come on nigga's don't sleep on this!
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vicious came harder wit his punches

vote-thoughts

no hate votes............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........................

__________________
.TCS.

*BREAKDOWN*

metas:LOC
punches:vicious
wordplay:tie
Flow:tie

it was close but punches win battles so... my vote= vicious

Last uppin I can give so please hit dis shit up!
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Don't sleep on this please!
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