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Yo I hate when niggas try to come at me I dont play this/
I have to spit first because im like Ali im the greatest/

Im like bubba gump im the shrimp boat captin and you my bitch/
Im gonna sit on my ass while you sweat and make me rich/

You like Ja-Rule niggas just dont like you neither do i nigga all I wanna do is fight you/
Im pimpin yo bitch i tell her what to do Next time shes givin you dome she gonna bite you/

Nigga im gonna give you a blow to the head and have you clouted/
Its like the buccaneers vs. the raiders in the super bowl you gonna get routed/

Yo nigga im like super man i gotta cape/
Im gonna run yo fat ass cause you outta shape/

Nigga dont get on my bad side im nasty im full of hate/
You dont get pussy you like Kobe you get charged for rape/

Yo nigga i gots no respect for you if you was a waiter you wouldnt get tipped/
You like a bad piece of paper nigga you just got ripped/

Nigga this nigga that donchu got sumtin better To-Say?/
STFU Im not black You gettin beat down by a White boy Today/

I guess Spittin Run-On sentences and Stretched bars Is ur Game/
CRYPT will throw ya shit back at u and Smear it Like Shit Stains/

U gettin fucked up Like Dialated Eye Sockets, robbed blind like punks who Pick Pockets/
U Admire my skills, if you had a necklese wit a heart my face would be In the Locket/

Im gettin Fed up wit u like Seein Jerid Repin Subway Commercials/
U make me Hurl............This bitch probably gobbles more nut than fuckin Squirrals/

Pimp U probably take this freestylin shit serioulsy wen I do it 4fun/
10 minutes I key shit down hit the Enter button Im already Done/

The vocab shown in ya verse says you Aint very good wit Nouns/
Im ur Critic, your verse was a bad movie, I give it 2 Thumbs Down/

If we were playin Battle ship Ide be sinkin ya Ass at every Angle/
U'll hit the Bedrocks, dissapear like Enterin the Bermuta Triangal/

Im a Feirce Storm sent here to Destroy ya lines and Errode Those/
Dissconnect u like Leggos, u couldnt flow If u wre under a Row Boat/


UPPIN

c'mon niggas somebody please vote

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Hit this up, let me get that feedback... There's no rules for this one because I live next door to the opponent, so we already know.

Pimpin01: I like your shit and you have the odds against you when you're first up. Your flow was on point, but the vocab was a little thin... Still an overall tight flow, don't get me wrong. Keep up that good shit.

Crypt: I have to say that you ripped this one. You already came into this with the advantage of second, but I like the way you flow. Good on the vocab. I don't have enough posts to vote, but my vote goes to you.

Favorite lines:
Pimpin01:You like Ja-Rule niggas just dont like you neither do i nigga all I wanna do is fight you/
Im pimpin yo bitch i tell her what to do Next time shes givin you dome she gonna bite you/

Crypt:U gettin fucked up Like Dialated Eye Sockets, robbed blind like punks who Pick Pockets/
U Admire my skills, if you had a necklese wit a heart my face would be In the Locket/

Good original shit to both. Keep it up. Hit up that link and drop a line!

both newbies, close battle. .. . .




overall - crypt had betta flow and punches!!!!!

vote = cyrpt

Nice job playa!!!!!! ;o)


The vocab shown in ya verse says you Aint very good wit Nouns/
Im ur Critic, your verse was a bad movie, I give it 2 Thumbs Down/


^^HAHA * GREAT LINES!!!^^

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They're only powerful when you got your back turned
I yearn for the day I finally meet them again
So I can give them all a taste of their own medicine
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going to have to go with crypt, killer punches and originallty

the both of you keep elivatin aight nigaz,

peace asjkfalk;sdjfl;askjflk;asdlfk;asdjlfk;js

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Once again im fuckin uppin here so ppl can start fuckin votin......................................last time i battle a newb

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