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me first

u set it up wrong i'll re-do it so itz right............................................. ..........................................

k shit im trippen do ya thing............................................. ................................................

you'll get murdered fast my flows a form of weapondry/
don't you understand that your life's in jeopardy/
threaten me and you'll see the repurrcutions/
flex on me and you'll see I ain't frontin'/
you;ll need all the help you can muster/
cuz the glock 9 milli is a skull buster/
the mossburg pumps called a bonecrusher/
you don't wanna see the flesh shredder/
take my advice your best bet's to get out the game and find yourself religion/
cuz bitches like you get served like bums/

prepare to be "merked"......

my punches painfully caress,i pump venom in ya chest, after this verse i'll pull da plug this is a last breath//1

u get "punk'd" while i spit my "much" needed "vibe",my "much dedications" fuck you, he's a herb letz call him a chive//2

this is thw worst attemp i've seen of sum1 tryin to be thug, runnin round' actin like he sticks people for they funs, this dudes retarded he must be dumb, u dont win battles by rappin about fuckin gunz//3

u win em wit punches,i pack many they my special feature, im not sayin ur a pussy but u aint gettin none either//4

keep wearin ya wife beater tryin to be eminem and swifty,but he packz less punches than a fucken armless fifty//5

it never really started but face it ya times done,im tellin this kid stick to ya suburban hood and keep packin ya cap gun//6

now on the topic of his verse it aint no hiphop reelness, any one would need more than an "arm and a leg" so that they could feel this(his verse)//7

fuck it i dont need ten lines i'll kill u wit 8, this is ur tutorial,this match i juss stole it yo, now peace and keep it reel my bro//8

this is the** worst attemp i've seen of sum1 tryin to be thug, runnin round' actin like he sticks people for they funds**, this dudes retarded he must be dumb, u dont win battles by rappin about fuckin gunz//3

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my punches painfully caress,i pump venom in ya chest, after this verse i'll pull da plug this is ya* last breath//1

my bad more spelling mistake, im out of it rite now

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Ko guy hit my battle up
dawg
damn u murdered this newb im so close t opollin it...give me a few...but damn u came way cleanewr then the newb an u took the battle hands downw
wordplay mechcanics punhces
an personals
vote_ KO
Hit my battle up an poll it
PC ILL be abck
If u hi my shit up pc

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Yo KO-GUY gets this better everything, just more experienced... this line from vorhees didnt even rhyme dawg......,

take my advice your best bet's to get out the game and find yourself religion/
cuz bitches like you get served like bums

vorhees you got style and I can see you getting real good man but you will have to take notice of other peoples battles to gain structure etc.....

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aight. V-Killa your ryme scheme was Ok. But your
punches Lacked, BadLey. Your best Line was your Bery 1rst Line.


take my advice your best bet's to get out the game and find yourself religion/
cuz bitches like you get served like bums/


W.T.F is this. your finisher was WEAK!...???^^
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K-O your verse was alot smoother to read (Flow)..
You had some good punches. No punches STOOD OUT
in either verse, but some hit harder then Other's.

[B]OverAll i liked both Verses.lol(watching NEWB'S ELEVATE LOL)

aight. V-Killa your ryme scheme was Ok. But your
punches Lacked, BadLey. Your best Line was your Bery 1rst Line.


take my advice your best bet's to get out the game and find yourself religion/
cuz bitches like you get served like bums/


W.T.F is this. your finisher was WEAK!...???^^
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K-O your verse was alot smoother to read (Flow)..
You had some good punches. No punches STOOD OUT
in either verse, but some hit harder then Other's.

OverAll i liked both Verses.lol(watching NEWB'S ELEVATE LOL)
VOTE-KO
cant vote yet, but i aint a NEWB.



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