10 lines
no hatin
no feedin
u spit 1st dawg

Im forming a thesis that you was born into feces
cuz everthing that you fuckin spits shit
son you should just have your wrist slit, or jump off a ridge cliff
cuz to be realitstic you wont amount to crap
cuz everytime you bust a rhyme niggas is bound to laugh
im bound to smack your ass for even trying and rapping off
cuz your wack -n- soft.. SON DEFEATING ME IS TOUGHER THAN LOOKING AT A PIC OF YOUR MOMS AND JACKING OFF(damn shes ugly- lol- nah)
so dont even try and diss creep, before i fuckin hit your grill so hard that youll shit teeth
dunn your fuckin weak and your music is beyond wack
your fuckin battles are bout as lyrical as a lil john
track

dag whats taking this cat so long to respond.. are you there man? lol

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Like a little boy you're dicks so small u cant "masturbate" //
Women hear you rap and say its like you're cock. A "state" //
You may-as-well turn gay and find a "boyfriend" //
Then ur a puff like ur dad who started that "trend"//
Everyone on rb knows you're bent. Not "homophobic" //
Why pretend to be straight? You're gay. You "know-it" //
Like a heavyweight boxer,we match up pound for "pound"//
But like Mike Tyson you're career will continue to go "down"//
I'm on the mic. Fuck iron Mike, my names MC "Phoenix"//
I'm gonna win this battle and teach you some "new trix"//

lol.. okay chalk up a win for me.. cool..

anways do you HAVE to have up to 100 post to be able to vote?

uppin on this shit.............................................. .......................................

up this shit

vote vote vote vote

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the text you typed is too short.. wtf is this shit

illeynice shit was hot but it was copy and paste from the NaS board....so next time come with some new knowledge aight

lol.. dog im fuckin artificial kid.. aiight kkep it on the low

why does it say shit lke you have to have a minimum amount of charaters.. wtf

uppin 4 votes,this dawg aint original,he's recyclin from other boards....................................

ok
Punches-mc
Flow-mc
Wordplay-even
Structure-mc
Vocab-even
Creativity-Mc
Vote=MC
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77411
^^peep this its getting slept on

Illeynice's shit was a lil better but you were exposed and if you recycling shit than u dont deserve to win...Vote goes to MC Phoenix....Both need to elevate....And MC Phoenix, stay away from talking about how gay someone is, I'm tired of seeing shit like that, maybe throw like one gay punchline and at least come creative wit it like making it into a metaphor or somin but a whole verse talking about how gay someone is, gay jokes was already played...Keep elevating kids...

Mc phoenix gets my vote cus the otha cat was exposed recycling his verse which is supossed to be a freestyle, mc phoenix had a better flow and punches aswell vote = mc phoenix

i cudnt vote, it said i neva gave a explanation so here it is again

Punches-mc
Flow-phoenix
Wordplay-illyenice
Structure-phoenix
Vocab-about the same
Creativity-phoenix
Vote=phoenix

plus the otha guy recyled, vote-mc phoenix