iight.. all regular rules.. i dont care how many lines.. u spit first ill drop shortly after u

Droppin it, here it goes....

So I'm new to the RB scene, but I'm commin up quick,
With a big grab-bag full of vocab makin yo eyes gleam when I spit//
Like halogen beams bent over the cuts in my ice,
You'll be momentarilly blinded thinkin tsheff is nice//
I make my flow do a dance on the back of your head
And move into your brain to disconnect some shit till you're dead//
How can you come with so little when your rep is at stake,
I'll leave you ripped and gettin pissed on like you're a urinal cake//
So throw your weak ass shit at me and try to knock off my crown,
But don't waste too much of your time cuz you're shit's gettin shot down...

Just a quick few bars for that ass, def. not the best brew....

re-evaluate, appreciate, never underestimate
the words of a real FEMCEE
give it up dawg
just recognize youll never spit rhymes ill as me
im tryin to communicate that we dont operate w/ wanna be B.I.G's (R.I.P.)
u think u bringin heat
i'll humor u
together we'll conquer ur fear of defeat
that played out shit u say
aint nuttin but a replay
they all kno u wack i just completed the survey
soundin like a spent ass rapper who just dont kno when to quit
u dont even kno the meaning of what it is to spit
let them dick ridin votes swell up ya head
ill have yo ass forfitting b4 u read the thread
i dont show mercy on soft ass bitches like u
after we battle im the bitch u wont quit tryin to pursue
take some words of advice n quit while ur ahead
u aint get the memo? u fake man..the real 2pac is dead
lord knows u got no place in this game,
ur a bootleg emcee
u battled me now youll never quit praising my name

Good run... Hit this shit up with the feedback...


100 Characters...................whatever....

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Yo, hit this shit up for real... up number 2 for me.....

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Here's how it went
flow:tsheff
punches:fly
vocab:fly

this was a good battle but i think fly came a lil harder,tsheff, yours was good to but i think you could've came harder

here it is

flow: too close to call
punches: definitely tsheff, fly used pac & biggie against tsheff when he never even mentioned them... seems like she was leaning on their greatness for punches... yo let them r.i.p, they ain't got nothin to do with this wack battle
personals: niether really
enjoyability: tsheff cuz at least I laughed at the urinal cake line

vote = tsheff

both need to hellavate

peace

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flow=t
vocab-f
punches=t
over all=t

fly yo uneven bars killt ya punches it didnt flow right but good shit both need to elavate ya vocab a lil bit but good shit tsheff it wuz short and too da point and made me laugh......vote=tsheff

Hit this up, drop that insight.....

UP number 3 for me.............

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If I could vote I would but as I didn't reachh the 100 yet drop an eye on syntext vs kew ill............................................... ..........................

uppin yet again.. be nice... vote ,................................................. .................................................. ....