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150+votes 2 votes

checkin in....

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***My Verse***

You went from interruptin SHOWS to bein KURSED... *
suprises don't stop there...now his shit's rehearsed?! //

It's like your "praying with dice", the way your "relying~on~luck"...
I'm denying~the~fuck, why bother replying~ya~suck //

Jammin A Steak Knife Thru Ya Capalaries Is Tha Only Time You Sprayin-From-Tha-Heart..
Stupid Fuck, Lodgin My Switch Blade Through Your Cerebellum Is Tha Only Way You Thinkin-Sharp //

Kid Think He Got It... ''Drulin'' On Locksmiths Is Tha Only Time You Spit-On-Key...
U Elevated? Droppin Cinder Blocks On My Corpse Only Time You Got Weight-On-Me//

***Finisher***

I Anoint the Page..Like Chain Smoking Chiropractors .. How I leave your Joints Arranged...
dawg, You could be Lincoln Ad-Verbs together..and Still not Coin a Phrase //

*his first name wuz dashowstoppa nd now it's Mentally Kursed...

quik key...

(he didnt want me 2 do a intro)
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aight check it

shootin you up causin you to turn your back, fallin asleep like you took a nap//
youll hear caps from my mac the way im “applaudin” you youll feel “claps”//

punches hittin to the brain leavin your spits and words feeble minded//
my flows leavin you spineless, mindless, eyes like Stevie motha fuckin blinded//

sendin bullets through your mouth watch them stick like glue//
get a clue, its like your fists are invisible cause their not comin through//

you beatin me aint happenin like Christopher Reeves runnin and walkin again//
hittin your brain, slittin your wrist, rippin your arteries out then chokin you wit veins//

assassinatin your rhymes like presidents and bein murdered in CAPS// (U.S. Capital)
your wack so dont rap, puttin 66 in your back like upside down Warren Sapp//

*Warren Sapps number is 99 99 upside down is 66*

iigh lets get some votes on this shit...

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I think MK's verse was ... well... basically boring, punches was slow and didn't seem like all was put in his spit.......

ST's verse was tight, nice wordplay, and punches was tight....... and he seemed he preveled...................

Vote:Street Legend

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Alright I WEnt Over This Battle And It Was Hot Shit...

***My Verse***

You went from interruptin SHOWS to bein KURSED... *
suprises don't stop there...now his shit's rehearsed?! //
^^ alright punch

It's like your "praying with dice", the way your "relying~on~luck"...
I'm denying~the~fuck, why bother replying~ya~suck //
^^first line was kinda played but 2nd was good

Jammin A Steak Knife Thru Ya Capalaries Is Tha Only Time You Sprayin-From-Tha-Heart..
Stupid Fuck, Lodgin My Switch Blade Through Your Cerebellum Is Tha Only Way You Thinkin-Sharp //
^^ nice word play

Kid Think He Got It... ''Drulin'' On Locksmiths Is Tha Only Time You Spit-On-Key...
U Elevated? Droppin Cinder Blocks On My Corpse Only Time You Got Weight-On-Me//
^^another hot line

***Finisher***

I Anoint the Page..Like Chain Smoking Chiropractors .. How I leave your Joints Arranged...
dawg, You could be Lincoln Ad-Verbs together..and Still not Coin a Phrase //
^^ Hot Finisher

VS


shootin you up causin you to turn your back, fallin asleep like you took a nap//
youll hear caps from my mac the way im “applaudin” you youll feel “claps”//
^^ played

punches hittin to the brain leavin your spits and words feeble minded//
my flows leavin you spineless, mindless, eyes like Stevie motha fuckin blinded//
^^shit

sendin bullets through your mouth watch them stick like glue//
get a clue, its like your fists are invisible cause their not comin through//
^^ pretty good line

you beatin me aint happenin like Christopher Reeves runnin and walkin again//
hittin your brain, slittin your wrist, rippin your arteries out then chokin you wit veins//
^^okay

assassinatin your rhymes like presidents and bein murdered in CAPS// (U.S. Capital)
your wack so dont rap, puttin 66 in your back like upside down Warren Sapp//
^^first one is good, 2nd one is so so

So In This Battle I Feel That Street Took You, Judging By Your Record I Guees You Could Of Come Harder... But Street Won This

Can U Guys Hit THe Battle At The Bottom Of My Sig.. Thanks

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^^^^ummm is it me or is street in spken legends and only people from spoken legends voted or a "ex" member??? noone from spoken legends vote please

uppin (1)

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2-0 me

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mentally had a ok verse..did'nt hit that hard cause his punches were kinda basic..disses were good but basic..add some heat and be more creative...work on ya wordplay..

street came ill tho..nice starter verse..good wordplay..disses were iight and you had some heat on the punches..nice overall

vote street

fah real though i think street had this dun with wordplay and punches

his wordplay was killer

mk your verse was boring

simple

vote- sl

Explain your vote better... it's taken away.
-Amby

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4-0 me...
uppin for one last vote...

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i think this was a nice battle

Punches - Street got this
Flow - kurse had tight flow
Multis- street took this area
Creativity - Kurse got this
Structure - Street
Humor - Street

Vote - Street........nice battle but street got this

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A vote was taken away... UPPIN so kid can have a final vote.
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