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I'm 2 - 0 against the warlords........ nothin personal towards you...................................

Brooklyn Holla Back

Similiar To Female Virgins Fucking Porn Star Guys Im Gonna Rip You In Half
Tonya Would Have To Elevate~Just~To~Be~Wack Thats Why I Laugh
Punches Hit Right Down The Middle To Leave Her More Split Than Her Pussy
She Claims She Is A Female But Arent They Emotional N Mushy?
Tonya Couldnt Be Enhanced~To~The~Top Even Wit Breast Surgery
Bitch's Mind Couldnt Enchance Even With Mouldery
.:.:BuH bYe GiRl:.:.
Even If You Rapped With Marlyn Monroe The Site Still Wouldnt Think Your Lyrics Are Dead~Serious
This Battle Is Like Completing Mensturation Cuz U Lost PERIOD (OMG)

Fiyah....

do I EnVy NY?, well I ENVY Brooklyn// cause I wish
I hadda been there when your Manhood got
Tookin//

you flow SO SO DEF tO HEARIN IMPAIRED,so put
that on Jermaine Dupree Daughter// MANY MEN
Kick it wit 50 CENTS, you stick to PUNTING TWO
QUARTERS//

I heard you was a Freak in bed, but I'ma leave
that ALONE// Can't-see-A-HEAD cause bitches PASS
by your BALLS like STOCKTON & MALONE//

Its WRITTEN in SCRIPTS that I kill mcee's and thats
WORD-to-PETER// cause really EnVy ain't TIGHT like
SNOOP Wearin a WIFE BEATER//

All your disses missin me Dam you PUNCHin
Me Wrong// tha only time peeps HEAR-YA-NAME
is in a COUNTRY Song// .................

{country western singers always talkin bout NY and shit}

Yo Nice battle ama vote reread this both verses are quit entertainin

ama brb bac fo the vote

and plzzz someone vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79031
^^Vote honest

Uppin Fo Votez

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Wow......this was the illest battle i seen in a while.....very nice......
I think it would only be appropriate if I broke this down line by line/bar by bar

Envy:
Similiar To Female Virgins Fucking Porn Star Guys Im Gonna Rip You In Half
Tonya Would Have To Elevate~Just~To~Be~Wack Thats Why I Laugh

^^nothing too fancy, but very nice for an opener

Punches Hit Right Down The Middle To Leave Her More Split Than Her Pussy
She Claims She Is A Female But Arent They Emotional N Mushy?

^^ouch!!!very nice punch

Tonya Couldnt Be Enhanced~To~The~Top Even Wit Breast Surgery
Bitch's Mind Couldnt Enchance Even With Mouldery

^^did not like the flow here, was kinda choppy

Even If You Rapped With Marlyn Monroe The Site Still Wouldnt Think Your Lyrics Are Dead~Serious
This Battle Is Like Completing Mensturation Cuz U Lost PERIOD

^^oh....my....lord......that was ill as fuck!!!! illest line by far in this battle if you ask me.

Tonya
do I EnVy NY?, well I ENVY Brooklyn// cause I wish
I hadda been there when your Manhood got
Tookin//
^^nice opener, not as good as his, but kinda funny lol.

you flow SO SO DEF tO HEARIN IMPAIRED,so put
that on Jermaine Dupree Daughter// MANY MEN
Kick it wit 50 CENTS, you stick to PUNTING TWO
QUARTERS//

^^ouch! nice shit, very solid punch.

I heard you was a Freak in bed, but I'ma leave
that ALONE// Can't-see-A-HEAD cause bitches PASS
by your BALLS like STOCKTON & MALONE//

^^stockton and malone are getting far too played. You set this up well, but I did not like this punch.

Its WRITTEN in SCRIPTS that I kill mcee's and thats
WORD-to-PETER// cause really EnVy ain't TIGHT like
SNOOP Wearin a WIFE BEATER//

^^holy shit! nice fuckin line!!!

All your disses missin me Dam you PUNCHin
Me Wrong// tha only time peeps HEAR-YA-NAME
is in a COUNTRY Song// .................

^^Eh....I felt like this was a weak finisher, kinda blah-ish if you know what i mean.

So....

Punches-Envy, very close but that finisher was ill.
Flow-Tonya
Wordplay-tie
Opener-tie
Finisher-envy
Multi's-tie
Comedy-tonya


so, in conclusion, this was close as hell. However, there must be a winner, and I felt that Envy had stronger punches, basically that malone and stockton line and tonya's finisher were both blah and Envy's closer blew everything off the page.
But major props to both. This was ill.


Vote=Envy

Tonya got this in every aspect. Envy need to
work on his flow , but the punches were tight
with both of ya'll.

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>ONE<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

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iight yall thanks for showin luv and votin...........good lookin on
explanations........uppin!!....................... ................holla!!

LMAO at the snoop wife beater line......
TonYa took this shit....i know that Envy
could come wayyyyyy harder than this.
but i dont think he took he serious and thats
whut cost him this battle.....VoTe-ToNyA
BettA PunCheZ


WiLL some one pleaze end thid shit 4-0 Me.....But Vote
Honestly
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78136

thx for tha vote !!.............................uppin this before i leave for
school!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!............................ ........holla!!

LMFAO At Tonyas 2 Votes The Fist One Will Get Changed But They Just Retards Not Knowing Anything LOL Uppin Fo Real Votes...

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YOU fucking fags dont know shit, ENVY NY took this in just about every category except flow, i'm sick of fucking D/R votes getting polled against people who have obviously merked there oppenent, VOTE ENVY