..:RuLeS:..
10 lines max

no hate- dick riders- crew votes


thas it

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KAUTIOUS

PhSyCoLoGiCaL LyRiCiSt

I thought we agreed that you would drop first? So I'll wait for you to post a rhyme then I will go afterwards. That's what we agreed to right?

Alright anyways, I'll post first. 5 bars, short and sweet.

I battle by way of deception I display rhyme trickery
The only thing obvious about me is that I claim victories

Of course there was no way for you to see this an unfair fight
And I'm not going to give you head but I am fucking you tonight

I stalk you for thrills like that flick surviving the game
It's not your fault your lyrically challenged and deprived in the brain

I'll knock out your lights like city wide black outs
I move systematic got 9 different attack routes

Twist your head till your neck break what a sucker
Too easy for me this is check mate muthafucker...

Now there's mine, let's see yours. Holla back.

What's up kautious? Are you going to answer back or what? Where you at? Come on now. If you're not going to battle after all how about you at least tell me why...

Carmen

yo im hear im hear

yo im dropping in a few

nice verse

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KAUTIOUS

PhSyCoLoGiCaL LyRiCiSt

5 bars

seriously this kid is so wack… I don’t know tah say
I could put down periods… that way your verse would look really gay

With 5 bars you get quickly eating like fat people at small buffets
Face it kid you fake and played like pre-worn toupees

Ripping you through this faze like sex in a female virgins state
U hit ‘rock bottom’ when battling me… Guess u could say I put a ‘hard end’ to your fate

This faggot Carmen ain’t harmin me with his weak attempt to win
He’s going out easier then porn stars taking a quick shot to the chin

Like the ‘Berlin wall’ you going on a ‘down fall’ when im hitting – pure demolition-
Im ending this ‘cold war’ now from rapper I turn to a mortician – like a fuckin magician-

Death has bin served to this bitch Carmen
Lets get some votes!!!

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KAUTIOUS

PhSyCoLoGiCaL LyRiCiSt

kautious won this....not by a lot....but i was feelin' his verse more............his punches hit harder, flow was even, carmen's verse was just off
Vote=kautious
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kautius-vote
because carmen was good but
he/she wasnt as good as some
of the lines kautius spit. kautius
you had some nice lines that was
able to win this battle but truth is
u wernt consistantly ill and that
could cost u.
-insert

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78821
^^hit up with honest vote please

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We hang the petty thieves and appoint the great ones to public office
Aesop.

uppin for votes

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KAUTIOUS

PhSyCoLoGiCaL LyRiCiSt

after reading it once i was going to go with carmen but then i read it again and saw that kautious had better flow
Flow:Kautious
Wordplay:NEITHER
Punches:Carmen
Metas:Neither
Multis: NEITHER
but overall verse goes to Kautious

Vote: Kautious

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Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

uppin for last votes

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KAUTIOUS

PhSyCoLoGiCaL LyRiCiSt

I write with agression, and i fight with expression,
All the hype that i'm stressins, like the nicest of lessons
Like a knife when it's left in, you'll get sliced to perfection
I'm the type to keep it tight, Cause my life is a blessin

...... save it for a battle ......................


need votes on this
holla back wiit votes

wanna finish this

2 more

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KAUTIOUS

PhSyCoLoGiCaL LyRiCiSt

Very Well Put.Both Verses Seemed To Be Nothin But Fillers And Weak Punches.

vote-Kautious