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Tim.E. Tumurk |
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Elevating Beyond Perfect
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iight....lets get this shit crackin.....
Maximum Lines:12 Minimum Lines:1 No Feeding No Biting No Recycling No Bolding No Using Anything To Make Your Verse Stick Out No Crew Votes No Hate Votes No Swaying Votes IF YOUR NOT GONNA VOTE THEN DONT POST AT ALL ALL VOTES MUST BE WELL EXPLAINED Verse Due:1 Hour After Check-in What?!...... ![]() check in... |
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IP: 399E F0FD
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IP: 399E F0FD
*Brooklyn stand up and witness the execution*
let's see how much shit you talk when I introduce you...machete to throat... you now regret what you spoke so you had to change ya name cause Purple Haze already been smoked...(herb) so keep running ya mouth and talkin' shit out ya ass... you finishin' last if ya crew'z "Da Nastiest Artists" then stupid ass just give em a bath... when I shit on you...you gonna catch hepatitis B and A... and that will be the only sickness incripted in ya "DNA"... you like to see men play...and then ya semen sprayz with envy... don't tempt me to murk you cause I'm on "real time" while you on Tim. E....(fag) |
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IP: 8044 0347
Im Spitting It All Out..Time To Go Hard..Damn Kid That Was A Joke
This Battles As Easy As Opening Coke..You Got The Audience Screaming "Bo0o0 You Shouldved Chocked" This Faggot Runs With The Worst Crew On The Site..Time To End His Career Death Is Very Near..I Got This Match Wrapped Up That This Faggots Shredding A Tear His Ass Is Shivering In Fear..Aww Whats The Matter Is My Skill Too Much To Take? Your Skill Is 100% Fake..Came Into This Battle Confident Now Your Saying "Fuck I Made A Mistake" Time To Slay Thee With My Stake..Naw Thats Fiction But A Good Murking Is Your Reality Im Gonna Launch You In The Air And Define "The Arts Of Gravity"..My Punches Got Ya Confused You Cant Even Tell Your Own Sexuality Yea That Line Was Stretched But Its Better Then Your Whole Verse Im Taking This Battle In A Hurse..Trust Me Your Whackness Is Not Classified As A Curse He Thinks Hes Cool By Stealing His Moms Purse..Well Hope You Had Fun Cause With These Lines Ive Alrdy Won Your "Phat"..No I Mean You Weigh A Ton..I Hope Your Ready For Your First Loss Cause Your Ass Has Been Sonned |
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iight good battle...lets get some votes
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Kung Fu
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IP: 2A8B 39F9
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*Brooklyn stand up and witness the execution* let's see how much shit you talk when I introduce you...machete to throat... you now regret what you spoke so you had to change ya name cause Purple Haze already been smoked...(herb) ^played,weak, and stretched^ so keep running ya mouth and talkin' shit out ya ass... you finishin' last if ya crew'z "Da Nastiest Artists" then stupid ass just give em a bath... ^weak but ok nonetheless^ when I shit on you...you gonna catch hepatitis B and A... and that will be the only sickness incripted in ya "DNA"... WTF? ^weak as fuck^ you like to see men play...and then ya semen sprayz with envy... don't tempt me to murk you cause I'm on "real time" while you on Tim. E....(fag) ^stupid^ overall verse rating...3/10 (atleast it wasnt as bad as some of the newbs) Tim.E. Verse Im Spitting It All Out..Time To Go Hard..Damn Kid That Was A Joke This Battles As Easy As Opening Coke..You Got The Audience Screaming "Bo0o0 You Shouldved Chocked" ^weak but nice multis^ This Faggot Runs With The Worst Crew On The Site..Time To End His Career Death Is Very Near..I Got This Match Wrapped Up That This Faggots Shredding A Tear ^not very effective but once again, nice on the multis^ His Ass Is Shivering In Fear..Aww Whats The Matter Is My Skill Too Much To Take? Your Skill Is 100% Fake..Came Into This Battle Confident Now Your Saying "Fuck I Made A Mistake" [b]^not any punches but it flowed well^ Time To Slay Thee With My Stake..Naw Thats Fiction But A Good Murking Is Your Reality Im Gonna Launch You In The Air And Define "The Arts Of Gravity"..My Punches Got Ya Confused You Cant Even Tell Your Own Sexuality ^some ok wordplay, could have been better^ Yea That Line Was Stretched But Its Better Then Your Whole Verse Im Taking This Battle In A Hurse..Trust Me Your Whackness Is Not Classified As A Curse ^nice flow but not much anything else^ He Thinks Hes Cool By Stealing His Moms Purse..Well Hope You Had Fun Cause With These Lines Ive Alrdy Won Your "Phat"..No I Mean You Weigh A Ton..I Hope Your Ready For Your First Loss Cause Your Ass Has Been Sonned ^once again nothing strong but nice multis^ OVERALL VERSE RATING - 5/10 (ive seen way better out of you...but it was still enough to merk this guy) [b]Vote - Tim.E. Tumurk
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^^word....lets get some more votes up in this motha!!!!
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yeah...I wasn't even tryin' on my verse...it was just a lil' like 5 minute keystyle...I thought that this would just be an easy win...but I guess I'll come with a little more heat next time...
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Kung Fu
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IP: 2A8B 39F9
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your str8 just come harder next time....
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Elevating Beyond Perfect
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IP: 8044 0347
^^word...i didnt try either....i just spit something to take the win....anyways...lets get more votes...................
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IP: 4577 CD9A
how dare someone so wack used ma name u open up his battle...........(king of theives).................
vote tim.e..........not the greatest battle.......yall both came a lil weak n tim.e ive seen better...........but ya vote tim.e...better punches...1 |
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Elevating Beyond Perfect
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IP: 8044 0347
^^dont forget to poll
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IP: 399E F0FD
^^^what the fuck kinda vote is that?????? Soundz like we got a dickryder up in here...you probably didn't even reade the verses...
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A cold killa
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IP: 841B 54F8
yo on battles like these i usualy brake down the pont system but crysis already summed it up for me,
i think T took this wit mults and overall better verse king you came basic and not enough for t who knew he had you when you posted blah blah i wasn't trying on my verse, well try, don't under estimate know one, ive dun it before i think you could of came harder with wordplay mixed in and your verse could of been 3 or 4 lines longer don't try and stretch to much jus kill on flow like i see mos tvets doing ok battle though, again vote:time http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79111
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