just tryin to earn some stripes

this is how it goes, time for summoneds fall/think you tony montana well i got you by the balls/watch this cat fall/i seen what you wrote son and not to mention/time to elivate your game kid, heres more competition/the way im spittin/youd be lucky to get close enuff to touch me g/ill buck thee see/make your blood boil from the three eighty/but not degrees/you shits hot, buy mine it lingers/youd have a better future as an rnb singer/sign i think of you is a middle finger/you gonna restrain me for the way i win/just liek rkelly gets restrained from the olsen twins/you battle record started with no wins/its sad but thats how it ends/towels been thrown in/so you just mad cuz i got the power/don't say anthing back, prove whos the coward

i never accepted to this battle b... but i'll spit 5 lines against you....

This cat didn't have to 'walk far fromt he sun' to get 'any brighter'//
His 'mentality' must have shorted out, lets face it, his decisions weren't that much 'higher'//
Your what? 19 and your a grade lower than me? Like 'retarded ADD' kids i'll simply 'not think about you'//
This isn't about me, its all about you right? But when it comes to it your only fucking your self, THANK GOD FOR SHIVA//*
I'm only spittin cuz you wanna ''earn stripes right''? Battling me, bitch, you better ''become a zebra''!//

*Shiva - Religion of not having sex there somewheres in iraq/iran/round those places.

Yo Hot battle Peeps
Wordplay=4
Punches=Sum
Metas=Sum
Lines=4
Overall=Sum
Vote=Sum yo i liked him better that the fact the punches he threw came harder don't get me wrong 4 bid ur verse hot but can only vote for one hollaz

vote for battle homies
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yo oops wrong battle vote sorry don't count this vote

ROUND TWO............................................... .................................................. ....................?

lets get some votes up in this battle... this is takin' too long... come on ya fuckin' sleepers!

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this was'nt a good battle....the sun was very elementary with his disses..punches were not so good...flow was ok...

Sum shit was all choppy and was'nt makin sense cause he was'nt rhymin on some parts...ya startin line thru me off but you coulda made it a lil betta.... to be honest because you wrote ya shit fuck up....{try editin} I gotta give it to the sun cause he was rhymin on point.....

vote the sun

^^LMAO!!!!!!!!! @ Tonya's explanation.....aight....uppin for u two.............................

peace
4:20

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NAW FUCK THAT SHIT... NUH UH, THERE AIN'T NO FUCKIN' WAY THAT VOTE GOES TO THESUN, NAW FUCKIN' BULLSHIT, THERE IS NO FUCKING WAY,

HARD to read? A lil choppy? Fuck that shit, fuck you, that vote DOES NOT count...

here'sa be ze deazal:

sun, extremely basic..

sum, good wordplay...

sun, good flow...needs orginization...

sum, no flow...needs orginization...

sun, work on some punches...

sum, jus organize...

winner: sum...

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Summond goot this even though Ya'll verses was'nt that
tight.Summond has a chance to get better but the
sun needs to work on a lot of things , especially with the
rhyme because you did'nt do that at all.

Vote:Summoned


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uppin, need more votes ya'll...... come on........................

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come on dukes... lets get this shit over with!!
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