ok these the rules 5-15 lines i don't give a fuck
3-0 ko/first to 5 wins
explained votes
no d.r./no crew votes/ no pussy moves nethings hollaz

U spit first kid

check in droppin soon.............................................. .......give me a sec to get some shit done at home............................................

I disperse hurtful words like BB pellets;eat these fellas, then feel done//
A gangster? You couldnt be dangerous with a Mac if you were the sandwich that killed Pun//
Damage with skill, un...matched;I'm postin up faster than Yao Ming and thumbtacks//
Fuck that, I'm twice as "ill" as you, like gettin jumped by Rugrats//
(Phill and Lill)
Like fights with white crooks you couldn't win with tight writes in~books (prewriten rhymes)
Ya verse? I'll bite your hook, throwing harder punches than Mike Tysons Hook//
I spit ANCIENT scriptures, rippin swifter like~twisters You jack off to .male~pornography~picture
Betta "recline"~ya~zippper..Cause you'll have " no pot to piss in" after I smack you with"BIG DIPPER!!//
I DROWN YO WORTH..like Jewlery In The Ocean you a Fool To Make This Commotion have you droolin insted of boastin when your CROWNED DA WORST!!!//
i might jus have to PULL OUT DA BEAM YO//
& leave you 'Flat like #77 former BULLETS AT FREE THROWS//
you full-of-that-cheap-flow...last time he he Spit A Nine he tried PULLIN A DEEP THROAT//
Hit you with a lyrical force thats centrifrical and disconnect your left ventricle RAP bars around you like my tounge was equipped with Tenticles//

You a fake gangsta come to the scenerey with PoLite SchEmes-
dog ya verse is SHIT,
I've seen betters KICKS from brazils island teams-
thats Soccer, ima verbal boxer, that'll send shots to spin ya top like a helicopter-
n simultaneously popin' ya corn head like Orville Redenbacher-
i'll leave u left red n stuffed n ya locker after i run out ya school-
break ya mom the bad news,after hittin her quick like fast food-
damn this lad is so rad n rude, i even got terrorist crews sayin "now thats a BAD DUDE"
after i load the mag n BLAST YOU, i'll visit u in hospitals just to HARASS U"
carve my intials in ya Caff n clavicle,/
put on gloves n grab ya DODO n smear it in ya Lunch-
feedin u captain corn shit for Brunch then Punch ya chest untill it Crunch-
ya whole style stunk, u really thinkin u won, but i DID-
look at what i spit, go back to yours and edit it my nig,
cuz just one line injured u till u needed a head wrap like da guy n my SIG-

yo wierd son how does ur whole style of text change in one day?? on the other battle you wasn't aite but u got a little betteron this one is less than 1 hour..............hmm............................. ...............................???

^^^^^^dats how i flow dowg..............u right dat flow wuz shitty i aint even think bout that one and this aint much better but i took my time a lil bit.......who eva said progress wuz a slow process wuznt talkin bout me dowg...lol

sounds like u got mad cuz u thought u had an easy battle and u got ripped.............its cool lol!!!!! uppin............................................. ...............................................

??? no losing is nothing to me i could care less i was reading ur other verse before i saw ur new verse posted her and they completely off like ur style is different on the other and it's way lower on the other so hollaz

TAKING VOTES NOW

i vote for death pistol.. just straight up had the better verse out of the two.. had personal disses.. adn nice punchlines

vote deaths pitsol

0-1 uppin this shit people vote god damnit

on da strength I'd vote for HiT'PaNiK if I had 100+ posts
But I dont so I guess
no b.s. notta d/r either but both verses were pretty hot.

hmm......i don't know bout this battle here....death pistol flow totally change from one battle...his whole style and tha way he spittin it....technically it was a nice spit but i'll hate to give you tha vote and that rhymes belongs to some one else...take it how you wanna but shit seems shady.......!!i'm out!!

dont matter man im just gettin started and dont say im bitin with no reason too..........damn haters but its cool uppin this.............................................. ..................

but afta contemplating.......deathpistol rugrat line was nice...nice punch there...some played wordplay ...disses were iight...overall you made adrastic change from your first and only battle before this one...

hitpanik came nice also...not that many barz as death but still good....hit had betta creativity in his punches...wordplay was bout equal...hit had a lil more heat tho...overall i think hitpanik last 6 lines helped him edge this..

vote HP