Sorry about the messup----
no crew votes/dr/crew----explain well also
deadline tonight
no flippin lines

votes onunches,creativity,wordplay,flow,multis,persona ls-----votes wont be counted if they arnt explained--dont forget the poll

Im checkin in, when u check in, we can get this started,drop ur verse right after mine.

peace----4-bid-N

i'm here dog, i'm waitin to go to bed so hurry up n spit nig... lets get this battle over with... i got school in the mornin and you should have already posted, don't need to wait for me to sign in... lol, i'm here, ain't goin no where when i got a battle....

I replied to this softie, ta engage in a "FLAT OUT DUEL"
U half way around the track, and this time around "UR ENGINE RAN OUT A FUEL"
Hit tha wall in this game, twice as hard as "FUCKIN EARNDHART"
U couldnt get ur emcee game up off tha grond "IF-I-KICKED-YA ASS-AND-GAVE-YOU-A-JUMPSTART"
Its just so blue and sad, when I "STRAP MY PEN FOR COMBAT"
U gon be confused like a cockroach in tha midst of seein "A LIL HELPLESS MOUSE CHASE A CAT"
This is rapbattles, u aint in tha mirror or whackin and rappin "IN THE SHOWER"
More power to the summoned 1 for facin his fears of the 4-bid-N
"THEN SHOWIN UP FOR THA DEVOUR"
I need my first W, and Im prepared ta come focused and "READY FOR WAR"
This bitch couldnt beat me if george bush "HELPED HIM EVEN THA SCORE"
U fainted, and feelin real ill from these "MULTI-PERSONAL-PUNCHES"
I bet when they land it a be like yo chest cavity took a left, and "YO BRAIN TOOK A JUNCTION"

I need say no more, r.i.p

4-bid-N

4bidN lost all 'angles' in this battle when he decided to spit a 'circular' verse//
Hes doin' a 'square dance' around 'boxes' just so he could 'CAPTION' his verse!//
You need to 'head back to class' cuz 'school' is just around the corner//
Get taught the 'hip hop 101' like ''Islams in english''... ''your a foreigner''!!!// oh shit!!!
Duck me? i'm throwin punches 'into ya ass' just so you could say you 'pack raw shit and start fartin in rap'!//
this battles like a 'divorced school teacher'... hows he gonna 'end a subject on that'?//
Settle this herb like 'newbies without a cause', follow by everyones 'rules', but lost to all 'Summoned' laws!//
You could never forget me, remember the case, cuz when ''Some one'' (summoned) starts the ''Writin'' (Titan) its ''Forbidden'' (4bidN) to KEYSTYLE after you LEAVE the fucking place!//

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this mawfuckin' piece... lets get some votes.

Yo Hot battle Peeps
Wordplay=4
Punches=Sum
Metas=Sum
Lines=4
Overall=Sum
Vote=Sum yo i liked him better that the fact the punches he threw came harder don't get me wrong 4 bid ur verse hot but can only vote for one hollaz

vote for battle homies
http://free.freespeech.org/unlimitedfreedom/

oops shit damn i'm fuckin up my bad bout link i'm at skool and during my work so i cut out wrong link pay no attention

ayo thats 1-0 lets get some more votes up in this piece ya'll... come on, stop sleepin...

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4-bid had terrible set up lines for his punches...then tha punches did'nt hit well at all...some barz were forced...his disses were iight...everything else was mediocre.....no heat from this cat..

Sum hit with a lil creativity and wordplay that came nicely...he lacked heat also but punches landed a lil betta...flow was iight

vote Sum

0-2---I guess, thats some bullshit, but oh well thanx for tha votes yaw.


uppin for some more votes

uppin for some votes----very well explained, and dont forget to poll vote. I know some a yaw cats can see the real emcee in this battle wit tha flow, vocab, wordplay, punches, and creativity---touch all these categories

out-

Uppin for them votes, come on yaw I know u like this battle



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YEAH... one more vote.... LOL nice battle forbidden you came strong but in the end dawg, i was just a lil bit stronger homes, just elevate, don't take it straight to the heart, i started off with losses too... just pay no heed.

punches: tie, end of story...
creativity: sum cause of tha bold print, tha only creative thing in this whole battle...
wordplay: see "punches"...
flow: 4, but jus barely...
multis: was there any true "multi's"?...
personals: here too...(see multi's for more info)...

i'll add one for the tie breaker...

tha biggest ego...can't use it, both of urs are HUMONGUS!!!...

hmm...

original: sum, 4: please don't " " and AAA ur hits, PLEASE!?!, it's too old...

winner: sum takes it like a female up tha ass, THANK YOU!...

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