40 mins from check in
5-15 lines
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no quoted votes
no vote swaying
no freeposting
no prewritten
no recycling
no biting
no crew
no hate
no d.r.
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you spit 1st

.:.GOOD LUCK.:.

I may not be a jew, so don't try and sue/
so don't be a foo', cuz i'll make you eat some poo//
I will not back down, because your a fucking clown/
and just remember that I don't frown, when the beat pound//
you know i hate you, and that i can't stand that foo'/
every time you try to do, you just suck like a jew//
now you should know that i rule, but you suck like a fool/
you know better then to challenge me to a duel, so lets just play pool//
mabye you should go back to were ur from, and beat on ur drum/
wile i set her and drink a quart of rum, and you can go kiss a bum//
I know that you don't know shit about me, cuz ur just another slut to me/
so why don't you just pay the fee, then you can be//
another little pussy whipped BITCH!

aight, checkin in...
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Look at this bitch throwin' stones, only way he could rock a mic,
All you're doin is holdin' me up, like a fat man on a group hike/
It's like I'm experiencing death, 'cause I already seen the light,
just crown me king now, 'cause this bitch already lost the fight/
Ur verse was filler-no killer-u aint got what it takes to be a spiller,
the FAKE mc is gettin hit wit' a thriller, now tell this fag who's iller/
I don't even have to write rhymes to end this guy's battle lines,
he's faker than them promises wrote on marketing billboard signs/
This fucker could be an artist but couldn't paint a clear picture,
wit' lines so old and unread, they were copped from a bible scripture/

anyways hit this whack shit up y'all...
uppin...(1)
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aight my vote goes to j.Dubya because he had a hotter flow beat him in every section and yo didnt he use this rap in my battle but anywas let i go cause i bett him and so did u j.dubya

MY 'VoTe' J.Dubya

NEED I EXPLAIN?? the real emcee is more 'wack' then marilyn manson....
vote=j.dubya
hit this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80253

i have a UZI and it's fully loaded and your gonna get it/
so just incase you don't already know that it's gonna be in a bit//
you know that i may not rule, so don't try and sue/
so don't be a fool, cuz i'll make you eat some poo//
god even i can do this, cuz i don't like ur fuckin diss/
even when i hear a cat hiss, i say fuck it and go take a piss//
I will not back down, because your a fucking clown/
and just remember that I don't frown, when the beat pound//
as the beats get harder, it pounds and pounds/
my balls grow alot larger, as i'm doing this round
you know i hate you, and that i can't stand a few/
every time you try to do, you just suck like a jew//
now you should know that i rule, but you suck like a fool/
you know better then to challenge me to a duel, so lets just play pool//
mabye you should go back to were ur from, and beat on ur drum/
while i set her and drink a quart of rum, and you can go fuck another bum//
I know that you don't know shit about me, cuz ur just another whore to me/
so why don't you just pay the fee, then you can be//
another little whipped BITCH!/
so just incase u wanna leave the street go and find i ditch//
just remember that you can't fuck with the_real_MC

THAT REAL EMCEE SHOULD CHANGE IS NAME TO WACK EMCEE

what are u ???/ 9 yrs old????????

I will not back down, because your a fucking clown/

wtf is that? is this ur first rap ever in your life?????????

you know that i may not rule, so don't try and sue/
so don't be a fool, cuz i'll make you eat some poo//
(eat some poo???? wtf is this bullshit????)

fuck rap man, go listen to some good charlotte or something

this aint for you


no further xplanations

Vote = JDUBYA

yea actually it's my first time on here you nigger whipped bitch so cut a guy some fucking slack............................................. .............
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yea bicth i don't really care what you think of me/
us all bitches to me and plus j.dubya is my friend cuz he//
the only one that can take you on and i knw that i suck/
but hey fuck it because i don't give a fuck//
i know that i'll never take him/
and i know that i'll never win//
but fuck it, it's all to help a friend/
that i know and he will depend//
on another good friend and that can be a good thing/
and you never know mabye someday i'll give the guy a (phone call)ring//

Come on y'all, let's get this closed.
UPPIN (2)
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J.Dubya vs. the real MC

this battle was nasty

lol the real MC! no hating - but ya shit garbage !
U RAP LIKE JUELZ SANTANA

breakdown


lol
you know that i may not rule, so don't try and sue/
so don't be a fool, cuz i'll make you eat some poo//
god even i can do this, cuz i don't like ur fuckin diss/

Some good shit
Look at this bitch throwin' stones, only way he could rock a mic,
All you're doin is holdin' me up, like a fat man on a group hike/
It's like I'm experiencing death, 'cause I already seen the light,


wordplay: j
punches:j
creativity:j
multis:j
effort:j
overall:j

LOL , thanx for the laugh Real MC , a little practice and yul be alright , no hating here , but Dubya got you on all angles and cylinders , punches , flow ,structure , personals , it was landslide , but like I said , practice , and keep elevating , yu be aigght.

Peace CE