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Chek In's Due: Monday 9/22/03
Verse's Due: Wendesday 9/24/03

Good Luck & Make This Match The Illest!!!

The Win.

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Checkity China The Chinese Chicken.......Have a drumstick and your brain starts clickin......................Checkin!!!!...Checkin !!!

Match me. .

Ya, this week im calling You Wack, but you deserve it fool,
cuz your the only guy where ^that ^ counts as a Personal!
cams reserving tools to blast these newbs that cant hang,
so when i let the Metal Go Clap, you will Go Out w/ a Bang!
fuck shouting & slang, doubting my name but i dead rivals,
only time ur names coming before mine is in this threads title!
what i Saids Final . . fuck copy an paste or a glock to ya face,
giving u more Kicks to ya Chops than Parappa The Rapper mistakes!
Tik's fake. . needs an aim list to save him w/ his played shit
^ that lines like his text career, Started Colouful but Faded!
your hated by half the board, and whats more is you lie,
last time you practiced Safe sex - you got Locked Inside!
Ur gay Tik. say my alias and you wont be breathing bitch,
cause i checked in with 'The Win' - and thats what im leaving with!

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I'm not wasting an intro....let's get this shit crackin'

Ian's gettin' mixed comments, topical legend...or so I'm told........
But wha u dunno is he bit in RnR n' demodded for fakin' polls.......
People said you spit nice...u mean there's words behind da trash?.....
And Cam...recycling's not for lines, only paper, plastic n' glass!!...........

Quit fuckin' around and do this

Your shit not felt, exposin' your Nasty Joints like short Quilts........
Said 'U wastin' ur Life?' u said 'Nah, I put it in a bowl and add milk'!!!.....
Left petrified, next to wreck this guy, Rac's the next vet to die...............
Joined WB to Run The Block...cept he thought it meant Exercise!!!............
Like a druggie' wit Mars in Nostril...define a Line from Bar bitch.......
Who am I merkin'? Cam, Vortex, Bayron Mind or James Bondage?......
Cam's typin' nervous, knows each letter like Records, Worthless.......
Shit like Therapists Boxing...punches only Tap lightly on the Surface!.....
Your cocky ass can't define battle...stick to Sacred Scriptures son.......
Checked In with 'The Win'...proving shit's easier said than done.........

Tanhk you for rdeaing tihs vrese eevn if the ourto is anynoing......

Ya, this week im calling You Wack, but you deserve it fool,
cuz your the only guy where ^that ^ counts as a Personal!
^^not bad...5/10

cams reserving tools to blast these newbs that cant hang,
so when i let the Metal Go Clap, you will Go Out w/ a Bang!
^^decent...6.5/10

fuck shouting & slang, doubting my name but i dead rivals,
only time ur names coming before mine is in this threads title!
^^nice but played...7.5/10

what i Saids Final . . fuck copy an paste or a glock to ya face,
giving u more Kicks to ya Chops than Parappa The Rapper
mistakes!
^^cmon cam....elementary shirt...5/10

Tik's fake. . needs an aim list to save him w/ his played shit
^ that lines like his text career, Started Colouful but Faded!
^^nice but again played...7/10

your hated by half the board, and whats more is you lie,
last time you practiced Safe sex - you got Locked Inside!
^^lmao!....9/10

Ur gay Tik. say my alias and you wont be breathing bitch,
cause i checked in with 'The Win' - and thats what im leaving with!
^...great finisher 9/10

Total:49/70

Ian's gettin' mixed comments, topical legend...or so I'm told........
But wha u dunno is he bit in RnR n' demodded for fakin' polls.......
^ehh not bad...6/10

People said you spit nice...u mean there's words behind da trash?.....
And Cam...recycling's not for lines, only paper, plastic n' glass!!...........
^^hmmm...not bad but not very good either....5.5/10

Quit fuckin' around and do this
Your shit not felt, exposin' your Nasty Joints like short Quilts........
Said 'U wastin' ur Life?' u said 'Nah, I put it in a bowl and add milk'!!!.....
^^how bout..no 5/10

Left petrified, next to wreck this guy, Rac's the next vet to die...............
Joined WB to Run The Block...cept he thought it meant Exercise!!!............
^^ehh again...cmon wtf is it with the weak punches? 6/10

Like a druggie' wit Mars in Nostril...define a Line from Bar bitch.......
Who am I merkin'? Cam, Vortex, Bayron Mind or James Bondage?......
^^nice but played...6.5/10

Cam's typin' nervous, knows each letter like Records, Worthless.......
Shit like Therapists Boxing...punches only Tap lightly on the Surface!.....
^^u obviously didnt reread...some shit dont make sense...6/10

Your cocky ass can't define battle...stick to Sacred Scriptures son.......
Checked In with 'The Win'...proving shit's easier said than done.........
^^great finisher....9/10

44/70

Vote-Cam

Ight mayne.......good explanation

about the lines....

Cam's typin' nervous, knows each letter like Records, Worthless.......
Shit like Therapists Boxing...punches only Tap lightly on the Surface!.....

^^^makes perfect sense dawg, maybe you need to reread it yourself....you know therapists always sayin' they 'thought I touched the surface today' kinda like they're 'session ending motto'...didn't think i needed to explain but w/e

Uppin 1-0 for Cam.......BTW jus wanna say dat this a hot battle....so please vote away people

Taktik and cam...

good battle both..

cam very creative lines..all around a dope verse..

tik very good too, but u seemed to fall in the middle of your verse..at the beginning I thought u had him and then the middle was a lot of filler and a decent closer...but overall Cam gets this..


vote-CAM

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good battle..but uh

vote- taktik


cams reserving tools to blast these newbs that cant hang,
so when i let the Metal Go Clap, you will Go Out w/ a Bang!

^^sorry cam but that was so gotdamn wack...

tik had me laughin through his whole verse..opener and closer was stronger then urs i felt..even though both came pretty hard wit it...

Your shit not felt, exposin' your Nasty Joints like short Quilts........
Said 'U wastin' ur Life?' u said 'Nah, I put it in a bowl and add milk'!!!.....

^^funny shit tik

Like a druggie' wit Mars in Nostril...define a Line from Bar bitch.......
Who am I merkin'? Cam, Vortex, Bayron Mind or James Bondage?......

^^as well as that...jus tha way i see it..didnt seem to fall of wit me...oh well..good ass battle

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Vote Cam

Tak came suprisingly nice in this.. He had a couple of nice personals & a couple punches had me giggling...

But Cam's whole verse was more consistent & seemed to hit harder... alot more wittier punches

fuck shouting & slang, doubting my name but i dead rivals,
only time ur names coming before mine is in this threads title!

nice

Tik's fake. . needs an aim list to save him w/ his played shit
^ that lines like his text career, Started Colouful but Faded!
your hated by half the board, and whats more is you lie,
last time you practiced Safe sex - you got Locked Inside!
Ur gay Tik. say my alias and you wont be breathing bitch,
cause i checked in with 'The Win' - and thats what im leaving with!

This whole thing right here was dope

nice battle

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