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Pre-Season Week 1
Topic: Tear Drop

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a family of abuse. a father named hate.
lifes a fastball, and i just stepped to the plate
my mother trusts not. evil in her eyes.
sister and brother, together demise.
but there is one safety, to teach me a lesson.
fuck my uncle, i want aunty-depressants.
like prozak i love her.. makes me feel warm
she stares at me calmly, like the eye of a storm.
but every storm rains, and her eye soon waters.
she cares for me, cause she lost her daughters.
drunk driving the cause, that made their life stop.
twisted everyone evily, and made the tear drop.
so upset like me, with love lost, she cries
and she's starin and prayin' for those who died.
the eye of the storm, has the bluest sad sky.

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20 bars, how are you gonna call a limit of 20 bars on a story verse, i dont know...myght have to surpass that amount, good luck...............................tear drop, stay real, peace, 1

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"I'm stuck with...what i'm Stuck Wit, cause i don't Suck Dick" - Jadakiss

you honestly shoud edit, i thought you no showed, that isnt right, you shoud post another reply when you write your entire verse, post once for checkin in, and post twice for tha verse, damn, hit me up when you get this, because i would have dropped, aight, stay real, peace, 1

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"I'm stuck with...what i'm Stuck Wit, cause i don't Suck Dick" - Jadakiss

sorry, i dont believe in no showin....this is my first time, but f it....i had too much on plate this week, plus i didnt even know you dropped your verse, i'm not gonna drop myne because it isnt completely finsihed, i'll be ready for next week, peace, 1

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"I'm stuck with...what i'm Stuck Wit, cause i don't Suck Dick" - Jadakiss