yo dawg u responded to sum shit i sed so i set it up
12 lines max
no dr
no hate
u spit first
no copyin and pastin votes
freepostin to a minum
if u duck i will put u on ma sig lol

I accepted u? Didnt i make a thread callin u out??
i wanted ur ass to spit first

but listen, we both spit in 15 min, no fuckin pre writtin shit, u down for that?

o and if u wana get this battle started, vote honestly on this cuz im in 2 battles right now

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79986

^^Be honest, peace

im dun my verse, when u drop ill drop asap after u................................................. .............................................

iight man dont start bein gay now spittin first is no big deal u sed u wanted it so heres ur chance dawg spit...........................

ok dont worry just spit, ill drop after u dont worry, just hurry up drop before 5................................................. ....15 minutes i know u can do that shit

no prewrittin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!

LOL what r u talking about I wasw dun a while ago, i told u 20 minute time limit dawg, then we'd both drop at the same time

wuts the matter wit u?

anyway heres my verse, know you'll enjoy it

Punches u Throw r nuthin, arm ampitated MLB stars Tryin to Pitch/ Its Mostly all real emcees On rapbattles.com, cept for this bitch/ I'll take you out unexpectedly like assasins on a roof top/ have ya runnin faster than fat couples monday mornins at I Hope/ yur nuthin, ill torture u worse than mid evil dungeons, puttin you out "the game for good" like "5th stage concusions/" Ill fuck you up more than a joint thats been laced/ your a discrace, U couldnt spray SHIT if u had an ass actatched to ur face/u probably never even gotcha penis sucked or experiended a Lover/ Ill hitchu wit my punches so hard, you'll Spin around n' Hover/ Ur defenseless like Natives tryin to Defend they own Lands, Ur shits broke like little kids makin money off lemonaid stands/ My words are so Explisit, more Illegal than Teen Pary Kegs/ IM guna end ya Win RUNNIN streek like troops gettin pegged in the leg/ the difference between me and u is a While/ Ur so low you'de need a fuckin Stool just to lay Floor Tiles/ Im Psycho like Straight Jacket Patients, Wit mind voices who Hate-It/ Like girls "given head", after this loss ur guna have to "Face-It"/ U gettin removed like routes and ploud like a Farm Trackter/ THis fags seen N' Squeezed more nuts than a ball crushen Nut Cracker/ This battles mines, like a crook wen it comes to purses im about to Snatch-It/ Ur jus slopply, bound to "fuck up", replica "Inspecter Gadget"/ (always messes up)

its an okay verses, some parts seemed forced and some bars strectched out into two

for example
Ur defenseless like Natives tryin to Defend they own Lands, Ur shits broke like little kids makin money off lemonaid stands/

that can't be one bar duke and btw, its best to write yer shit in bar format than like a paragraph

lot of ppl like to see flow and hate to be the one that have to decipher your flow by re-reading, it should be obvious at start

neways, when the battle starts i'll vote on dis ish

it sounds better over the mic

and dont judge this battle over flow i hate when ppl do that

haha apprentice is still not done yet

OO SHIT I WAS WATCHIN THE GIANTS IIGHT FREESTYLE RIGHT HERE WE GO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

IIGHT DAWg
Shut the fuck UP!.... and battle the goD! ya rhymes feminine, resemble ya broad/(FAGIT)
no safehouse bitch.. spittin circular merkin directions abroad, rhymes comin down tumblin, humblin yall!Rumblin raw, my saliva could.,.....blunder ur jaws,(he is speechless)
come on now beatin me is not happenin, ur just my aprentice kid/
got u tryin to rhyme against me, but its like pissin in the wind, now im spittin 4 the win/
like i was a lyrical miracle, tyrinal syllables, tearin u,
dont duck, ur easily hittable/
(Style Switch)

Im rappin wit a monarchs thought process, ya hawk dick and talk nonsense, fuck deadin our beef, im keepin shit constant/
Im ponderin i stop pop and snap like modelin, then i let go/
rippin thru ur skin to enter the blood flow, im killin free agents like my name was neo/
This ass tearin, shoul TEACH U RESPECT, Cript left, when he seen me wreck the net/
i understand u too scared to spit first, its cuz u wanna take rapid bites/
i kicked u dick faggot pussy like u was a hermaphrodite/
Ur styles got me laughin right, like styles p from police u should take a massive flight, BITCH U AINT GOT APRENTICE's FUCKEN APETITE!! /

Yo faggot ass how many lines did u write i sed fucken 12 man ur a lil dickrider!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

both these nuccas was wack to me real nucca battle on the street puttin ur best flow on the internet for phony nuccas to see man yall nuccas wack i wont vote