10 lines
no crew votes
you spit first
I've never fed off a verse... and you know the regular rules.

i await....

hmm i am a but busy right now but i will start my verse now Pz....and no feeding and the rules were unlimited lines....
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unlimited lines or 15 lines wat u want.....no pre writting so dont go offline wen i spit

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well, then hurry up, i have a life off the net dawg, don't need to be spending my time WAITING ON YOU... so just... spit what you can and make it ya best.

SummondTitan: Please Take It Easy On Me I Am Just A Wack Herb
ShEpNeY_zAnY : Hmmmmm No..Prepared To Be Merked

SummondTitan: check it, i have school tomorrow and its passed 11:30, i need sleep, so either a) post up ya verse tonight, or b) keep it for tomorrow
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He Supposidly Has To Do Some Stuff, But He Secretly Pre-Writing..
But Even If You Do The Chances Of U Winnin Is Like Seein Pigs-Flying
Your Punches Are Comin Weaker Than Ethiopian Kids In Fights..
Turnin Off Your Lights..Cuz You Aint Shinnin Like When Its Night..
You Musnt Be Very Bright..For Accepting My Call-Out..
I’m Goin All-Out..And Your Wack Verse Is Getting Flipped..
Your Shit So You Gon Fall-Out..U Like Paper Cuz You Easily Getting Ripped..
Puttin This Fag To Bed..Maybe My Hard Punches Will Clear His Head..
Ur Better Off Dead..My Names Always Gon be Ontop Of Yours, Like Dis Thread..
No Time To Play..I’m Drivin Away..Leavin U Pealin Yaself Off The Highway..
This Battles Slowly Movin Away From You, And Its Comin My-Way..
Your Gon Wish We Never Meet, Cause Im Handing You A Defeat..
Just Call Me A Butcher, The Way Im Handing You Beef..
Your Lines Stretched More Than Fat Guys Elastics..
Shits Drastic..I Aint Even Done And This Bitch Aint Lasting..Dis An Easy Trashing..
Have U Had Enough..He Tries To Be Hard By IM’in Me An Actin Tuff..
Wearin A Metal Sweater Is The Only Time You Gon Be Tuff..So HUSH..
He Said He Got A Life But After This Battle That Life Will Be Ending..
This Loss I’ll Be Sending..To You As A Gift From The Winner..
Your Skills Will be Decending…And Ill be Serving You Like A Waitor At Dinner..
U’ll Need A Verse Or 2 To Even Compete Wid Me Cuz No Bodys Worse-Than You..
You’re the Only “Emcee” I Know That You Can Beat Widout Using A Personall..
Im Strickin Like Lightnin..U Wack So If He Does A Good Verse Hes Pre-writtin Or Biting..
I’ve Trully Merked This Fag So There Aint Gonna Be A “Remember The Titan”

SummondTitan : Ohhhh Shit I Am Merked
ShEpNeY_zAnY : Better Believe It Bitch

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nice battle but don't have enough post 2 vote



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lmmfao... aiight, i'll spit when i get home... lol............................................... ......................................

aiight... check it...

I'm not gonna say nothin about the so called conversation that you put into ya verse... makin' up fraud...

alright...

Sephney lost all 'angles' in this battle by spittin a 'circular verse'//1
I'm 'fucking you over' worse than 'lost boys' with a 'priest', ''locked in a church''//2
You battling me? Its like an ''armless man in a row boat'', you couldn't ''handle the paddling''// oh shit! 3
~Killers~
I'm taking this battle like a ''circular flow'' no need for ya ''next turn''//4
This bitch ''packs more fudge'' than the ''keebler elves firm''//5
And he couldn't be ''taught'' how to rhyme if his ''keyboard started to learn''//6
~Ending~
I'm spittin nothin but ''punches'', i better ''type without my gloves''//7
The only way you could ever catch some ''emotion'' is by picking up a ''hooker from Loves''//8 (loves, a truck stop)
I'm hatin that i had to key my verse, i could have ''pre writtin'', fuck the ''waitin''//9
Cuz after i spat my ''key'' i coulda sworn i heard ya ''key board shaking''//10
~done~
Look, when it came to ''being bright'' and havin the ''better shit'', i guess you just got the ''short end of the stick''//11

DONE~> Oh n by the way, i coulda sworn i seen that same ''elastic'' lines before... hmmm....

Punches: Newb
FLow: Zany
Enjoyment: Newb
Vocab Newb
Creativity: Zany
Personals: None
Similes: Newb

I think the newb took this jus by a little, I enjoyed his lines better, zany was a lil basic, didnt seem like he tried, underestimated this dude

But yo newbie dont stretch ur lines, dont make three sentences adn ryhme all the werds at the end of them, thats shit, u got pretty tight punches so just work on ya flow

PEACE




Yo zany goto ur crew recruit thread...............and vote on me vs Apprentice boys

callin' me a newb? lol... thanks for the vote fam, but that just stresses me out... this was a key... i never write, unless i have to... but i'm far from a newb buddy.

Decent battle....Break Down

Punches: ST
Personals: none
Multi's: SZ
Wordplay: ST
Meta's: ST
Flow: ST

Vote = Summon

Good battle but Shep U spit a buncha played punches mostly and then the ones that were original didnt hit very hard...Honest opinion...No Beef

Check out my battle against ArtiQlit
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81561

thanks for the vote fam, i'm openin' ya link as we speak...

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lets get this finished tonight.

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I';ll break this shit down

Punches ST
Fow Shepzany
Vocab ST
Creativity Shepzany
Personals Neither
Structure Shepzany

overall i think shepzany took it with a more professional verse