Rules

Verses Due: Saturday September 27th
Voting Ends: Monday September 29th

Topic: Body Of Water

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

2 dayz to vote on battles?!.....whats wrong wit u?.......anywayz...
in......good luck dunny...........and .........i'm............ghost................1

lol, don't worry about it, this week I'll close them on tues
-Maven

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In..

im in a Sea of Trouble & my Heart's Sinking to the Bottom
Seaing Plenty of Fish w/ their insides Cold, Dead & Rotten
Swiming thru Hostile Waters & the Sharks are Watching
Plottin to Bait me on thier Hook.. Dating Pockets & Looks
Taking what im Rocking & Drop it inside their Pocket-Books
these Good Looking Crooks will Clock every Cranny & Nook
Watch as my understanding is Shook, then Shaken off its Axis
cause in the Game of Life.. i've been Taking Off from Practice
i'm Perfectly fine w/ Perfect Imperfections of my Actions
& for those Directing Dollar Signs
that wasn't in my Contract OR My Coming Attractions
Acting as if my Cash Flow Runs Deep.. Cut & see the reality
it is actually, as Shallow as each of these Bitches' Personalities
thier life is an obvious Fallacy.. Floating in an open Ocean of Lies
hopin rich men Drown in their Waves.. just to Change the Tide
Wading inside are Red, Black, Brown & Dirty Blonds
Hiding thier Intentions as they Lurk in a Secretive Murky Pond
then attack like Leaches & attach thier Thirsty Tenticles On
& then it goes on..
so before it reaches that point.. be prepared before they appear
let them know they are just Bodies Of Water
& you Sea right Thru Them... its Crystal Clear

YOU MONEY HUNGRY, GOLD DIGGING, DIAMOND INCRUSTED BEEOTTCHES!!!
GET A JOB......... BLOW

if u can't grasp the imagery....don't vote!



surrounded by bodies of water wit the intent 4 this nigga 2 drown
like obesity in the Gulf i'm stayin afloat,no chance of being down
removin the chains,disperse from mixtures of the barley and grain
free of the hypnotism that controlled cells that function my brain
a physical drain..rid of the water these bodies producin a flood
a kin of Jehovah & its known that water isn't thicker than blood
verbal weapons & adrenanline rushin thru veins,murderous plots
equipped wit protection from hazards 13th avoidin these shots
to thick twice i think not,while thinkin the lungs continue 2 expand
fillin wit the aqua that no mortal could withstand...understand?
misunderstood,who gives a fuck when water rushes wit detest
waves wit the M.O. of capturing ur flesh & withdrawin ur breath
anxiety settin in when the riptide occurs & pulls wit the currents
Niagra Falls & death by the deep end is also a natural occurence
satan possesses sinners & flow wit H20 controllin their bodies
hate glimmers off pupils wit the lust of disappearance like Gotti
keepin the eyes evaluating cuz the tide always remainin on high
& these demonical bodies of water carries power to cause u 2 die


like whoa......

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uppin this thing.....

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votes cleared.
those were all one liners, which won't be accepted as votes.
the score is 0-0, if either of you have a problem with it, pm me.

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

u even deleted Ill-Mentals?.......blah.....whateva.............

get him to vote in depth. no reason for his vote to change, just explain it more.

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"thier life is an obvious Fallacy.. Floating in an open Ocean of Lies
hopin rich men Drown in their Waves.. just to Change the Tide"

That line was like... piss pants good for me.
The metaphors and general control of language was outstanding from Evolve.

I didn't get into 13th Disciple's verse as much. It could certainly beat other verses, but I thought of it as a 50% verse.

Vote-Evolve

SS is seriously wack....

instead of bitching about my league you could tell me what was wrong with it. LaRyan explained his vote, so it counts. If you're heartbroken because I deleted shitty votes, then get ill mental and whoever the hell else voted to vote again, but explain it.
-Maven

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wasn't nobody bitchin.....i called it wack.....which i feel as though
it is......don't disrespect me kid....either way.....i'm out....no beef...
.....1

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