k.u spit 1st normal rulez.
8 linez.1

hey you'll im rookie im new on rap battles,
im gunna wipe da floor wid u cos ur like a baby wid its rattle,
hey oli_dogg stop smokin dat grass,
that shit wont gt u a g.c.s.e. pass,
man who da fuck do u think u r tryin 2 battle me,
ur 1 of those dumb shits that cant even count to 3,
hears a bit of a lesson 4 u that i will make u c,
im rookie u dnt wanna fuck wid me,
i hear bout ur mum givin head to a horse,
so her and ur mum dad gt a divorce,
then after that she ended up marryin u,
her own son the only fuckin jew,
fuck off gt off of my back,
and realise 1 day wen uve gt ur head out of ur crack.
im rookie

Ok bitch,
listen 1st of you expecting to win with rookie as your *name*?
go back to dance school, cus your playing in the wrong *game*,
the rulez say 8 linez, and you say i cnt count to *3*,
you looking in a mirror and mistakeing yourself for *me*(reflection of a twat),
the closest your gettin to a shag, is a wank on your *bed*,
a girl slapped you round the face, and you bragged she gave you *head*,
so listen bitch your saying i got my head up my *crack?*(his rap),
well your a mother fuckin faggot who pays to get it from the *back*.
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start voteing honest vote plz............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .pz

votez plz............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........

OLI_DOGG got this better overall had nice disses, punches, and flow.

Rookie u flow came up short u disses,flow,vocab was very weak elevate.


Uppin 4 thees emcees

uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .........................

yo lets get sme shit on da poll.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....................................1

This was honestly the worst shit ive ever heard but if i had to give it to someone oli but not by much.............................................. ......

^^^ exactly what dat guy said

dis shit was....................................

but i have to give it somebody
so I'd give it to Oli for harder disses basically

elevation is needed on both, big time!

that was about 3 min of my time I will never get back. I hate the both of ya.

I dont even know how to rate this other than just giving this crap to oli

dogg got this one........................ it was elementary from both sides man.....weak battle.........fucken shit u can find a nursery rhyme..

yo dnt let dis shit die man.uppin 4 votes............................................. ...........................................pz

uppin............................................. .................................................. .....................................pz

yo if i had to vote n e 1 in this battel
i wud vote oli his flow was everything rookies wasnt
but it still wernt tight



yo will sum 1 plz vote on these plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82352
and this 1 especially
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82245

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