Ok it was 10 lines

i spits first

Involbe lyrics and shots to tie this kid neck in to notz...
Weakness my drop, wordplay and shopz when it huntz...
Like brestKnukles i overpass 'fist' when he punches...
I Serve more 'steel-fist' and Metalic boxer on lunches...
The battle its done.. but i record the good moments...
Hot like shut ovens when i rewinds the right solvents...
My flows hurts you kid.. like disney world cheap rhyde...
deep slide you head trill you drown on a water clift hive...
Finisher time.. wait i abused and shifted your lines...
lifted your spine up high till ya intestins whyne...

when i BUST- A- RHYMES your girls ass im a MAKE IT CLAP
JUST FACE IT BLACK YOUR RAPS ARE MORE REPLULSIVE THAN A 400 POUND MANS NAKED ASS
THESE AINT YOUR BASIC- RAPS..
I ADD A TWIST TO THE CAMERA STANCE, FLOW SHARPER
THAN SLAMMER SHANKS
I'LL LEAVE A KNOT ON YOUR HEAD THAT STRETCHES OUT FARTHER
THAN THEM HAMMER PANTS(LOL)


IM SO FAR AHEAD OF THIS DUDE IM PREDICTING THIS MANS PAST
LETS SEE.. HE LOST ALOT OF BATTLES CUZ HE CANT RAP
his lips STICK TO MORE DICKS AND PUSSIES, THAN BOXES OF TROJANS AND TAMPAX
he couldnt PEN a SMOOTH lyric WRITING with LOTION on AND A HANDWAX
IM ON SOME SHIT LIKE SENDING YOU "GET WELL SOON"CARDS STRAPPED WITH ANTRAX
FUCK AROUND AND GET RANPAST QUICKER THAN TRAIN TRACKS OF AN AMTRAX
LIKE SALVATION ARMY BOXIES IN A POOR NEIGHBORHOOD YOULL GET STOLLIN FROM AND RANSACED

ALSO NO HATE VOTES ALLOWED.. THAT INCLUDES HITPANIK AND MR SPITS............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..............

actually ur an idiot steelfist cause i have good feedback on you
Ok heres my point of view on this battle magician battle was ok but not hot and steelfist even though i don't like you i'm real so ur verse was better with the punchlines like
JUST FACE IT BLACK YOUR RAPS ARE MORE REPLULSIVE THAN A 400 POUND MANS NAKED ASS
THESE AINT YOUR BASIC- RAPS..
I ADD A TWIST TO THE CAMERA STANCE, FLOW SHARPER
THAN SLAMMER SHANKS
that shit was nice but ya second verse was wack and rhymes were played out but
Vote=Steelfist so hollaz

OK IM NOT GOGIN TO BE A PUNK BOUT THIS.. I SAID NO HATE VOTES.. NOW I AINT MEAN HITPANIK AND MR PISTS CAN VOTE IN MY SHIT ONLY IF THEY VOTE FOR ME.. ITS ONLY FAIR TO THE OTHER DUDE.. SO IF THE MODS SEE THIS THEY CAN DELETE HITPANIKS VOTE

I DOTN WANT SNITCHES VOTING IN MY BATTLES!

hmmm your an idiot battle me son and cause if u want mods here ur gonna get banned cause ur name got banned and u came back so ur being an idiot son

LOL.. THE ONLY ONE BEING AN IDIOT IS YOU.. IM SURE THE MODS COULD GIVE A FUCK LESS.. BUT WHEN NIGGAS LIKE YOU ARE SNITCHIN

BEGGING THEM TO BAN ME.. THEN THEYLL WANT TO BAN ME

NOPE SORRY PARTNA I DONT BATTLE MOTHAFUCKIN SNITCHES

GO BATTLE MR SPITS IM SURE YOU FAGS WOULD MAKE A GOOD TAG TEAM

steelfist took this with better worplay and better punchlines


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I cant poll vote cuz I dont have enuff posts yet, but if i were to vote it wouldve been for Steelfists. No disrespect to Magician, he could probably kick my ass any day...but your flow was off and that disney world meta sucked more than a stripper.
Yuor first verse was good but it faded in your second verse. "JUST FACE IT BLACK YOUR RAPS ARE MORE REPLULSIVE THAN A 400 POUND MANS NAKED ASS" -that was f-in' funny and I consider it the best line you had.

Vote: Steelfists

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steelfist took this 1...................he had better flow and pucnhes soo i give it to him altogether he merked him hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81772

good shit.. up this.............................................. .................................................. ......................

WHO DA FUCC ITS BLACK!! I THINK YOU BIT THAT SHIT!!