RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > The Cage > Battle Archives > Front Lines Battles
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Demosthenes 5 100.00%
OLI_DOGG 0 0%
Voters: 5. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 09-27-03, 10:03 AM   #1
.:K:.
Hooked
 
From: U.K
Demosthenes vs OLI_DOGG

IP: 6D46 19C8

normal rulez.8 linez.u spit 1st.1
 
Old 09-27-03, 10:08 AM   #2
Alchemy
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
IP: B805 4681

10 Lines dude, no mroe and no less, that good for you? I hate doing below, so 10 lines?...........................
 
Old 09-27-03, 10:11 AM   #3
.:K:.
Hooked
 
From: U.K
IP: 6D46 19C8

alrite man set dis shit da fuck of.1.............................................. .................................................. .......................
 
Old 09-27-03, 10:26 AM   #4
.:K:.
Hooked
 
From: U.K
IP: 6D46 19C8

cum on man spit.............................................. .................................................. ..................................................
 
Old 09-27-03, 10:34 AM   #5
Alchemy
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
IP: B805 4681

OLI-Yes, sir I am studying to be a Chef.
Demo-Well your not that good.
OLI-Well all my other teachers said I was.
Demo-And why do you think that is?


Mastermind, confind to my mind, battleing to be refined in time/
He spit a deal, told his warden to fuck him for a 3 course meal/
Made me spit first, dead body soon to be squeezed into a hurst/
We got Chef Boy R D, please you couldent even make rave"oli"/
Soon To Die, STD victem spit when he high, he start wit slow flow/
Little lady wearin pearls, clams to play B-Ball, gets shook my girls/
Battling cold in tears, I entered the thread, worst fears appeared/
I'm started spit worse then eating a girl out and she pussy farted/
Retreated into a corner, I'm just about finished, call a couriner/
Gonna no show, little homo, rewind, want me to spit in slow-mo/

OLI-Well my first teacher was a warden.
Demo-Yes...
OLI-My second teacher was a Elton John.
Demo-Yes...
OLI-I can't remember why they liked me so much...
Demo-You let them fuck you, dident you?
OLI-Yeah that was it.


Alright guys I took your advice and shortened my lines. Quite a bit actually, tell me what you think about it now.

EXPLANATION: In his profile he said that he is a Chef.
 
Old 09-27-03, 10:50 AM   #6
.:K:.
Hooked
 
From: U.K
IP: 6D46 19C8

Ok so bitch im a chef, and you think thats *funny?*
wel how bout this for a laugh, atleast i got some *money*,
look at this poor begger a bitch ass fuckin *broke*,
outa the bin he picked up a fag end, jst to have the last *toke*,
this kid went to a gay bar to ask for a *job*,
and he jumped at the chance of sucking the bosses *nob*,
so dnt give dis faggot points for punches give him points for *slaps*,
and dis *ho* aint rly got no *flow* so diss his fuckin *craps*,
oh shit im sorry i meant his poor excuse for *raps*,
oh fuck it im so bored of Demosthenes spitting im of to take a *nap*.

Demo- and y did u do dat hunny?
Oli- cus i saw u doing it to your boss.
Demo- oh deer Oli dat wasnt my boss.
Oli- it wasnt?
Demo- no love dat was my dad.

1
 
Old 09-27-03, 10:52 AM   #7
.:K:.
Hooked
 
From: U.K
IP: 6D46 19C8

votes plz .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....................
 
Old 09-27-03, 10:55 AM   #8
Alchemy
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
IP: B805 4681

Man, why do you noobs have to feed off of someones verse, plus you stole by closer, come on now, your just not cool, try not to do that in anymore of your battles, peeps get mad over that.
 
Old 09-27-03, 10:59 AM   #9
.:K:.
Hooked
 
From: U.K
IP: 6D46 19C8

ha i didnt steel shit man i jst continued ur shit ass little story.lol.u cnt win it thru da ryhme so u have to put ur fantasyies in der aswell.lol.
 
Old 09-27-03, 11:07 AM   #10
Alchemy
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
IP: B805 4681

It's called an Opener and a Closer asshole, I doubt you can win with those rhymes anyway. You only had the last word rhyme, just shut the fuck up and let the people decide, no mroe talk, just uppin for votes from now on.
 
Old 09-27-03, 11:41 AM   #11
.:K:.
Hooked
 
From: U.K
IP: 6D46 19C8

uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...................
 
Old 09-27-03, 11:46 AM   #12
CRYP']['
BANNED for D/R
 
From: windsor
IP: 6DED 74A3

Vote-Demo

Better punches and similes

Other dude had nun, and fake personals

Demo feedin off a battle is normal dude, thats how emcees audio battle all the time

Jus watch 8 mile

"SO IM A GERMAN EH" thats okay u look like a fuckin worm wit braids/

Or the miss clever line

Its kinda like defending urself, but the other dude sucked at it and it got him no where



Mearly another murk
 
Old 09-27-03, 01:20 PM   #13
Alchemy
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
IP: F345 2339

[1] Uppin for some vtoes, drop your link and I will get to your battles...........................................
 
Old 09-27-03, 02:06 PM   #14
Symilee
a perfect imperfection...
 
Symilee's Avatar
 
From: DC
IP: 7B2D 5EB6

cyrpt = stupid

feeding is NOT a normal thing to do. Actually its against normal rules set up. If people do it in audio, who the fuck cares? Is THIS audio? This is text.....dont get it twisted. Oh wait, never mind u already did.

Alright, enough ranting, on to the battle....

To be honest, ive seen Demosthenes come a lot stronger than that. His spit wasnt horrible, but it lacked really hard punches...your flow wasnt bad though. Oli, you feed off his verse which was bad. Then u put a gay punch in there, which is played out. You had no originality, and u copyed his closer dialog thing. All of that equals a sucky verse. So even though Dem didnt come strong, he didnt have to.......vote = Dem.

peace.............................
__________________
Representing for:
................
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/att...ntid=8810&stc=1
 
Old 09-27-03, 02:17 PM   #15
Alchemy
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
IP: F345 2339

Another vote for me...

[2] Uppin for some votes.

Drop you link and I will get to your battle.
 
 


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is Off
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 07:38 PM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.