5-10 lines only no hate no crew no d/r and herb votes must be fully explained or will not count

yo yo...............................
aiight aight..............
checkin in dawg
ima spit asap
jus finishin off ma food

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I'll show the first signs of weakness , and still to burn mics bare/
leave ya seein so much BLOOD(S), it like a CRIPS worst nightmare/ yous gettin striped like prodigy an the truth is gon be laid bare/
every time i ryhmr i fuks another rapper gets up/
ur nothin, like the shit i spit into the dentist cup/
U like a day in jenna jamiesons life, keep gettin fucked up/


aiight aiight there ya go man

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yo yo let me fix it dawg


I'll show the first signs of weakness , and still to burn mics bare/
leave ya seein so much BLOOD(S), it like a CRIPS worst nightmare/
you's gettin stripped like prodigy an the truth is gon be laid bare/
an every time i ryhme i fuks another rapper gets up/
ur nothin, like the shit i spit into the dentist cup/
U like a day in jenna jamiesons life, keep gettin fucked up/
my rhymes is ex-directory, ur's are in the phone book/
none of your shit is freestyled, of the net its looked up//

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why u startin battles, then goin offline about an hour later dawg,
u a pussy, u hav to go offline an write your shit bitch

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uhh hmm iight iight ima drop here

Yo you gotta git sum new type of skills/
your ryhmes ive seen before cuz there awlays used like clothes at good will/
gotta quit actin like your gonna spit sumthan~hard/
you could tack this shit as if you was standin in a methan~yard/
if i fucked right in front of ya you wouldnt be able to see me cumming/
but best belive when my ryhmes start to pop you best be runnin/


eh g'luck an

aiight nice drop now all we need is some votes,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,




c'mon peeps lets hear your opinions

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aight willibob 2nd berse was nice i liked it .....................keep the structure like that its easy and ill..............not too many hard punches but bob still gets tha vote

vote=bob

that was deffintely a weak battle you guyz need to elevate your skills but my vote=BOB he had the fucken sick ass line that dentist cup shit is hot bob deffinetly came harder bettter flow better punches netiher had multis or personals but good battle to both of yall elevate STAY HUNGRY

uppin 4 votes............................................. ........2-0.....................
uppin.........................................uppi n..........................

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might as well close this shit.......................................


aiight




peace....................

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Vote=will

yes....it was weak....but nonetheless will won this with better flow punches and wordplay not much else to say about this battle
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its like this I have seen much betta come from Williebob so here goes my vote

Multi's-Backwordz (he only had one but it wuz more than willie)
Flow-Willi
Punches-Willi
Personals-backwordz
Originality-Willi

It wuz a close battle it really could have gone either way
My Vote-Willi ( I liked the J. Jamison line)

CNT vote yet but will won dis, jst beta allrnd but a weak battle n yall cn do beta.........................................pz