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Chek In's Due: Wendesday 10/01/03
Verse's Due: Friday 10/03/03

CH-CH-CH-CH-CHECKIN IN

In Like Backwords Baseball Caps
Goin 12-16.. Which You Wann go ?
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16

Well Here's 12...
Keyed Right Quick
So I Can Get This Shit
Outta Tha Way..

Lets Not Get It Twised.. You Are My Bitch, This Battles' Rigged..
Think Not Kid? FYI, Com Produced Auspicious' Sig..
He's Boring ^^ That Was His Whole Life Story. Took Apart Most Of You..
Comedian Is Gay, Coms Not Any Better..Steal Ya Bladder So I Can Piss On Both Of You..
Ima Rip Apart Kids.. I'm To Deadly To Start Wit..
^^ That Beat Ya Whole Verse N' It Was Only A Friendly Remark Bitch..
Oh..I Didn't Say Anything Bout Ya Crew..Mind My Manners..
Ima Snatch That Yak Pak Like A Snack Pack N' Wipe My Ass Wit Tha Banner..
I'm Crackin Ya Back LIke Bass..Snappin Necks Like Snares..Mess Ya Face Like Toms..
Only Place Ya Name Is Useful Is At "ComedicHerbs.COM..
How Fair Is This? Its Hilarious, To Think Your In The Same Category Wit Me..
Should I Thank You Or Your Wackness.. For Puttin My Wins Up To Sixty..

There Ya Go Corn Flake

Edited For Spelling

His verse was a freepost but the cost is a loss
You might see a sig… we see a box with a cross
I couldn’t give a toss like a hoe with no arms
You’ve ran out of luck* like a leprechaun with no charms
Like snorting lemon sherbet my lines have zest
Like fat kids in striped shirts your lines are stretched
Your rhymes repressed, like glass pussies I smash this hoe
Like a garbage man orgy all you give is trashy blows
You got no support from your crew like I stomped your bones flat
The Regime twisted your neck so you could watch your own back
I deliver pain with a smile like a sedative nurse
You know spelling wasn’t the real reason you edited your verse


*Auspicious means - lucky

fav. Lines from COM:

His verse was a freepost but the cost is a loss
You might see a sig… we see a box with a cross
^LoL

I couldn’t give a toss like a hoe with no arms
You’ve ran out of luck* like a leprechaun with no charms
^LoL

I deliver pain with a smile like a sedative nurse
You know spelling wasn’t the real reason you edited your verse
^Damn

Fav. Lines from Aus:

He's Boring ^^ That Was His Whole Life Story. Took Apart Most Of You..
Comedian Is Gay, Coms Not Any Better..Steal Ya Bladder So I Can Piss On Both Of You
^LoL

Oh..I Didn't Say Anything Bout Ya Crew..Mind My Manners..
Ima Snatch That Yak Pak Like A Snack Pack N' Wipe My Ass Wit Tha Banner
^LoL good shit here nice multies

I'm Crackin Ya Back LIke Bass..Snappin Necks Like Snares..Mess Ya Face Like Toms..
Only Place Ya Name Is Useful Is At "ComedicHerbs.COM..
^nice Wordplay here..

Persoanally I think Auspicious took it, his personals were scorchin..although COM had some nice metas & the better flow, it wasnt enough for AUS's Wordplay & Personals..

Vote = Auspicious

Vote Aus

Although COM came a little better than what i expected... his
punches could have been worded a lot better.. Aus's verse was
decent w/ some humorous punches.. all in all Aus was better

VOTE - AUS

This Wuz I Good Battle . . . COM had some had a few nice punches but they could have been worded betta like evolve said.. Aus's verse had a few more tite punches then COM'S had...Also Added Some Humor In HIs Verse . . . Aus Took Dis . . .

Good Battle

Auspicious' verse was far better in my words....Com used too much "like this.." "like that.." etc.

And Auspicious had a killer finisher



My Vote=Auspicious

4-0 to Aus

Ight No Doubt.. Uppin 1 More..
Glad This Shits Gunna Be Ended
Quick................... -Gh0st-

LOL.. i got to laugh at Artik for rewording my vote...

Aight...

Aus takes this with better punches...
COM came kinda nice but wasnt as effective...

Decent battle
Aus takes it however

Vote- Auspicious

Aus got this...Betta puns
Com came played, his puns
didn't really seem to be there
Aus also had some pretty good
personals....

PoLL

AuS...