10 lines
no hate
no d/r
no crew
u spit first

yo this nigga is weak//
he not hight like a moutain peak//
i smoke weed everyday//
i'll shoot him wit the ak//
i dont play//
this guys gay//
i dont take time i juss freestyle//
ur phifer off 8mile//
suck my dick till u die//
like ezibit i mutiply//

freestyle that was pretty basic man you got to get more creative and work on ya multi's and wordplay and vocab I cant really say much cause I am still trying to work on the same things but I figured you might want some pointers if you want another battle hit me up though and I'll battle ya

and whoever gets a chance peep this and lets please get some honest votes cause if you read through all the posts youll we been haven probs with peops talkin shit about legit votes

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83318

that shit was lower then the newbie level//
u might as well start diggin yo grave i got tha shovel//
0-2 and aint winnin no time soon//
ur juss a titan i'm coach boone//
this took less than 10 minutes to post//
u can aat least bite at the most//
that should have been post u shouldve noshowed//
and now ur bout to be 0-3 and cryin like a hoe//
ur not the type of nigga that should be rappin//
u can drop ur hardest shit eva and it'll still look like ur slackin//

uppin 4 votes
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both verses were weak but X had it. Both of ya'll should work on the punches, vocab, and flow.

Vote-XXX

you guys decide to go back to wearin diapers i mean fo real what kinda shit was that yous are a disgrace to rb.com you should be ashamed of yourself the only good thing i could say about this battle was at least it rhymed

fk was wack as fuck...PERIOD. xxx took this hands down.............................................. .................................................. ...........................

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Realest~Rap(5-0)
3%(5-0)
inkwell(5-0)
eminem minis(5-3)
lyrical extasy(5-0)
whiteRwrong(5-0)

yo nigga i what tryin to spit hard whats tha since when u dont go 2??? see what i mean NE way


UPPIN 4 VOTES

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83403

werd up ... both was weak ... buh x had sum harder punchlines...

yo aiight both yall need some work juss like ery one else said. but x definitly had that man....... if one of yall wanna work on ur rymes com halla and we can get a battle on aiight halla

That was wack as fuck holy shit!!! Triple X, where are the punches you were throwing in the last battle? Well here's how I break it down:

Personals: Neither
Wordplay: Neither
Punches: Triple X
Metas: Neither
Multies: Neither
Structure: Neither

Vote: Triple X

But seriously, 3X, the verse you posted in our battle is the one I'm using as a standard for measurement here. You went from average to wack...where the fuck did your skills go?

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What the fuck is this?

Sorry, but that was mad weak-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

POLL VOTE damn dont say shit if u aint gonna poll vote

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