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Ill lay ya out…cause I know ya weak/
My punches…knock out ya teeth!!!/
Go see a dentist…maybe ya can get fakes/
Ill slice you…like ya a b-day cake!!!/
And ill leave you dead..cause you suck/
You just swinging..and all I do is duck!!!/
This is easy..cause I will beat you/
Give ya a lose..and im just new!!!/
Im done..so ill put a bullet in ya head/
Why did you say yes to me..now ya dead!!!/

This bitch came to me on AOL..Talking shit to me about winning..
Bitch I don’t see that happening…cause its like a nun sinning…
My punches are hitting you harder than "high current", got you "shocked"-up ..
Shaking your teeth like a rattle, ya cant open up cause your jaw is locked-shut..
“destherapper”???….wow isnt that a original name..
And I know you wont be giving me my second L…like ya claim..
Cause ill tare ya weak ass shit apart..like it’s a piece of paper...
Ya just easily “ripped” cause we all know…whos greater…
Don’t go testing ya luck..cause in this battle theres no 4-leaf clovers...
And the chances of you actually winning this..is like a drunk that’s sober..

Masta.....masta masta masta won. killt it on everything........................................ ..........

Des had a good structure and flow. Few punches though...and the one's you did have were pretty weak. Masta's flow and structure weren't as on point as Des's....but he took the punches no doubt. Much harder hitting, actually used wordplay. Battle wasn't close, but Des could end up being good if you learn to throw some serious punches. As for now though

Vote ~ Masta C

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masta took this man simple as that. if u ask me was the punches that did in des and thas bout all I got to say for it. cept des man u had good flow and ur structure was ok but u gotta try to land more punches and make em harder.

vote: masta C.

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lmao....... ight breakdown
Complexity-Masta C
Vocab-Masta C
Wordplay- Masta C
Punches-Masta C

Vote- Masta C

pickin on newbies! shame on u! *shakes head*

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lol hey thanks for the vote.....................keep the votes coming...............still need some more votes.................uppping..................

i think masta took this on everything

u want me to break it down then just tell me but i got
masta c on this

vote-masta c

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