1 verse
5 bars max
no crew, hate, d/r, friendly votes
no feeding & no biting
i'll set it up & duke, you spit first


i'm outtie!

one more thang yall.. please explain yall votes! that is all!

my lyrics are curious like george but more furious/
im n experienced lord but ill knock u delerious/
this battles mysterious cuz when im done rappin youll ditch/
n klinik wont even spit cuz he probably/ a wana be/ who wears abercrombien fitch/

[Finisher]
BITCH NOW U LACK CONFIDENCE, CUZ U KNO UR SHIT SUCKS N MY LYRICS R KNOCKIN SENSE TO UR CHEESE FALTTNIN OUT UR DOME PIECE..............

mmeeeeh notta good day fer me..very tired n aggrivated o well......all i ask is honest voting

you’s more into yourself! You forgot about dissin me,
you seriously need help! Bitch I had a feeling you would be a PUSSY//1

I’ll give you my honest vote! I’ve never read anything as worst as that,
I thought I sucked but compared to me, you’re just a tail-trapped rat//2

speaking of delirious, and the only delirious soul is you!
shit! You wouldn’t recognize a clue if that bitch walked up to you//3

you type, you cant talk cuz I sliced up your vocal cords,
use my lyrical swords to cut your head open to install my new keyboard//4

if you had a billion lines, none of them would be brazen,
your wackself lost the second I clicked on the Submit Reply button//5

.................................................. .................................................. .... no crew, hate, d/r, friendly votes! drop your honest votes yall! we uppin madly! outtie!

COME ON YALL! WE UPPIN FOR VOTES.. DROP YOUR HONEST LINKS.. EXPLAIN YALL VOTES PLESE.. COME YALL.. VOTE AWAY!

aight um...i havent voted on text in a while - but what the hey im bored

duke's verse::
aight man your first 2 lines i was feelin - i mean that shit just read real well - wasnt really a punch but i was likin it fo some reason

after that man you kind of just got sloppy - i mean if you can keep shit like your first two lines i think you could elevate alot and do some good shit here

kliniks verse :
wasnt feelin your opener - reminded me of some icp shit -
the delirious shit was hot cuz you reversed - added a nice little punch - good shit

some advice - i would cut down the "computer" refrences "submit reply, keyboard." not that your lines were whack its just youll prolly get cracked on for it...itsallgood

but this battle goes to klinik - his shit had more punches, flowed better in general.. whatever - str8 battle

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We Dont Need A Fuckin Crew Forum!

Kost

ima say klinik takes this, heres my breakdown.....

structure-tie
flow-tie
vocab-kost
wordplay-tie
punches-klinik
personals-klinik
overall-klinik

props to the both of ya, but im say klinik takes this....

peace.......

..............................aright fellaz! feelin the feedbck and votes.. still uppin for votes though! 1!

both verses were weak--but i think kilinik got this with better punches, and more consistent flow----vote=klinik

peep my sig and vote honest---
thanx

i know i aint really suppose to vote so i cant go on poll but man klinik owned this thanks and holla back go to my battles and please vote i need them closed out

....................once again, i'm feelin these votes fellaz! but we still uppin for more votes! 1!

vote klinik....nice come back to da other cats verse.
both verses ok
da first dudes finisher woznt dat gr8
klinkik really took it 2 da guy..lyk woz really aggressive and dissed da other dude more..
da other guy kinda lyk lifted himself insted of dissing klinik
aight
peace

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yo duke at a nice opener like the other fool said i was feelin it...the curious george thing was original and witty. but i think klinik kept it tight through out the whole thing wiht consistent punches. and his finisher was just way better than dukes

i would vote duke if i could....25 more posts or so!

yo everyone hit up my battles wit honest votes...dont be lazy...voting is waht keeps this site tight.

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