Meh... Let's make it short cuz I have 2 active battes now
but anyways

5 Barz=10 linez

U know the deali!

reggular battle procedures apply... na na na

U spit 1st cuz u called me out

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ok im checkin in and start to key it up................................................ .................................................. ....

Im at work right now ... im not een spittin in my other battle till I get home...

but u called me out so lets do this

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NO MORE FREEPOSTS

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ok ok here we go
hopefully u wont feed cuz if u do i'll prolly get merked

look,
this is a prewritten an ur a chick, 2 things that aint true, cuz ur a troubled man//
bout to deal u a loss u jus cant cope with like u were a chicago cubs fan//
u cant beat me, you'll learn to understand//
ur gonna be expieriencing problems like u were ALICE IN WONDER LAND//
when im on, im on top of the rap ladder//
if i lose this battle i'll be MAD, cuz i HATTER(had her)//
you should check out ratemypoo.com, cuz ur rhymes are all crap//
u could change ur name to KEENEN or KEL, you still wouldnt be ALL THAT//
hit u hard like i was PETER PAN//
till u cant stand, smack ya ass all the way bac to NEVER-NEVER LAND//
look babe, my scrap book is hotter then ur rap book//
so here's some advice, leave rb alone and jus sing a HOOK//

everything in capitals goes along with somethin else like the peter pan movie called hook and keenen and kel were on the show all that, and the mad hatter from alice in wonderland

uppin (1) so lady d can see this and drop her verse............................................. .................................................. .....................

Nice Effort But It Was Futile On The Real, I’ll Kick Ya Ass So hard You’ll Shit Out My Heal
Similar To A Helpless Animal Being Abused You Just Take The Beating, Screech & Squeal
Beat This Bytch Wit Multiple Tones, Must Me Hardheaded Cuz Ima Leave The Chrome
You’ll Be Blind And Cryin ,Actually Try?Why When I Could Win On Multi’s Alone
Severe Is In Fear, Laughed At This Queer, His Nut Sack Resembled A Tic-Tac Expressin Flat Backs
Face The Facts ,This Battle Will Leave Multiple Rashes As If You Just Had Ya Pubic Area Waxed
He Couldn’t Elevate If I Put His Head On An Elevator To Say His Mind Was Climbin
Like A Shriveled 60 Year Old Virgin Severe Lyrics Will Never Find The Hyman
Life Fades As Divinity Chips This Fake Hips Rips And Bakes Bracin Your Asshole Jus To Get Ya Straight
Ankles Snappin Wit Your Diaphragm Breakin Ruputres To Spleen Will Dictate Bics Break To Stick Faith


Sorry I Aint Got back To This.. I Had Better Things To Do...

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aight man....


some1 vote


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Easy win fo lady.....She basically took this battle with every concept there is.

Lyrics- ya need to work on a lot of stuff. Flow and vocab mostly. YOur hits werent hard either......keep at it though....

Vote- Lady..

PEACE

^Damn I havent seen slick in a while

Anyway breakdown

Punches: Lady
Flow: Lady
Multies: Lady
Vocab: Lady
Metas: Both

Lady wins by a Land Sliiiiiiiiiiide

Can you guys please return the favour its getting slepped, and you'll enjoy the verses

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86058

^Agreed, duke u might wabba hide your face in public SL u just got STRONGarmed by shorty, punches was severe, the flow was advanced and multies was advanced, also could someone drop on my piece? just want honest votes, its called Da NFamous vs Eye-m-ill 1luv.

Thank You Peeps!


~LadyD~still uppin


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Come On Now Aint So Hard To Drop A Vote!~





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Lady got this....seriously...it wasn't even remotely close...just outpunched severe

Best line-
Beat This Bytch Wit Multiple Tones, Must Me Hardheaded Cuz Ima Leave The Chrome
You’ll Be Blind And Cryin ,Actually Try?Why When I Could Win On Multi’s Alone

^^lmao...and its prob true...

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this was a joke....lady took this all the way....severe, you shit didn't even flow right....metaphors were aight, but it flowed like shit.....love though...elevate....check out my ish...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86173