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My spits are Heavier than Ebony Black Buts
MC Dirty Sally? Im battlin a Fuckin Slut
Your horribly wack, thats why you were put in Omens Crew
As for ur Interests and Occupation, nobody wants to Ask You (Profile)
You'll run outa Lines to spit like Fine Tipped Ancient Pens
Ur last line in the Rules, U've prob said that to Several Men (lets do this)
My Punchlines are tigher than Immature Ten year old Clits
U cant controll this like Supermarket kids throwin Fits
U'de get kicked off stage like Incorrect spelled words at Spelling B's
Im a man Ur a Women Sweety, you'll literally Mop The Floor With Me
Didnt expect this Newbie to Be ILL like Organized Terrorist hits
Its like this Dirty Bitch just Blazed Weed cuz she's Unable To Spit
Unable to Key Dirty Ryhmes then why'd u put it B4 Sally
In a Teen Abortion Survey, you'd be at the top of the Tally
Wipin windows with Windex is the only time Lady Reads Clearly
Ur taktics smell worse than wen U bleed every month Yearly
Actin like your Hard, Ur only that when ur nipples coress Wood
Saying U have a chance is like no Robberies in the HOod
Intensity for U is Limited, like Making Large cash off Doe
Only time u Pierce Sharp Jabs Is while sittin down 2 Sew


Ur Turn

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86221

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Molten You sound like Michael Bolton thinking he's soul
You'll never get nowhere rapping cause I'm sinking ya goal
You need to be banned for posting here stinking like whoa!
Your as gameless as a broke ass scrub who b winking at hoes
I'll take you to 0-1 so fast it'll make your fucking head spin
Like Linda Blair in The Exorcist I'll relieve you like excedrin
U look foolish like Ja in the fast and furious u hit a dead end
I think your a virgin u have yet to find a pussy 2 stick your head in
U must be gay cause women don't like u thats why u diss me
Shit, I'm betting the only breast u see is original or xtra crispy
The only chance u have of touching me is 2 become 5-0 & frisk me
I'll show u my ass cheek that's the only place you can kiss me
And the only time I sew is when I'm stitching up herb faces
And I do that only on an occasional fucking herb to herb basis
I'm certain you like it rough cuz that's the way I'm jerking you
Even tho I know it's hurting u I'm sonning, feeding & burping u
Thanks for the 2 ez victory it's been a pleasure merking you
I'll slay u bag u then toss u in a dumpster behind Perkins fool

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this was a nice ass battle very close

structrure=tie
punches=sally
creativity=tie
metas=sally

sally took this wit the punches. everything else was even. props to both.

my vote=sally

Wow^

You obviously didnt read the battles to say She had more punches and metas


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^ dont play a bitch dude................. this battle was pretty even, i was feeling the flow of both........... but Sally's punches hit slightly harder.... she had some nice double rhymes in her verse as well...... nice work to both, but punches one this

vote = Dirty Sally

My spits are Heavier than Ebony Black Buts
MC Dirty Sally? Im battlin a Fuckin Slut
^Average opener, 2nd line was alright 6/10

You'll run outa Lines to spit like Fine Tipped Ancient Pens
Ur last line in the Rules, U've prob said that to Several Men (lets do this)
^Alright punch, but second line was weak, 6/10

My Punchlines are tigher than Immature Ten year old Clits
U cant controll this like Supermarket kids throwin Fits
^Alright, but both lines were unoriginal 6/10

U'de get kicked off stage like Incorrect spelled words at Spelling B's
Im a man Ur a Women Sweety, you'll literally Mop The Floor With Me
^Second line disses yourself lol, weak, spoiled the bar 5/10

Didnt expect this Newbie to Be ILL like Organized Terrorist hits
Its like this Dirty Bitch just Blazed Weed cuz she's Unable To Spit
^Weak 5/10, lines aren't makin much sense

Unable to Key Dirty Ryhmes then why'd u put it B4 Sally
In a Teen Abortion Survey, you'd be at the top of the Tally
^First line wack, second line was ight 5/10

Wipin windows with Windex is the only time Lady Reads Clearly
Ur taktics smell worse than wen U bleed every month Yearly
^First line wack, second line ill, cood have been structured better 8/10

Actin like your Hard, Ur only that when ur nipples coress Wood
Saying U have a chance is like no Robberies in the HOod
^Alright line, pretty plain, 6/10

Intensity for U is Limited, like Making Large cash off Doe
Only time u Pierce Sharp Jabs Is while sittin down 2 Sew
^Average closer, elevate on those, 7/10

54/90

I removed your worst line so the amount of lines between you n sally are the same so the score comes out fair

Need to make your lines more original, and put them down so people can understand em better.... keep elevating homie.....


Molten You sound like Michael Bolton thinking he's soul
You'll never get nowhere rapping cause I'm sinking ya goal
^Bad opener, could have been better, 4/10

You need to be banned for posting here stinking like whoa!
Your as gameless as a broke ass scrub who b winking at hoes
^Good line second line was ill 8/10

I'll take you to 0-1 so fast it'll make your fucking head spin
Like Linda Blair in The Exorcist I'll relieve you like excedrin
^Ain't seen that movie, but alright line 6/10

U look foolish like Ja in the fast and furious u hit a dead end
I think your a virgin u have yet to find a pussy 2 stick your head in
^Alright line, bout 6/10

U must be gay cause women don't like u thats why u diss me
Shit, I'm betting the only breast u see is original or xtra crispy
^lol, good line, 9/10

The only chance u have of touching me is 2 become 5-0 & frisk me
I'll show u my ass cheek that's the only place you can kiss me
^Ight line, but using same word to rhyme, not good.... 5/10

And the only time I sew is when I'm stitching up herb faces
And I do that only on an occasional fucking herb to herb basis
^Good punchline, original, 7/10

I'm certain you like it rough cuz that's the way I'm jerking you
Even tho I know it's hurting u I'm sonning, feeding & burping u
^Alright line, 6/10

Thanks for the 2 ez victory it's been a pleasure merking you
I'll slay u bag u then toss u in a dumpster behind Perkins fool
^Bad finisher could have been alot better.....6/10


57/90

Overall good verse gurl....
Just keep battlin n you'll get iller n iller.....

Scores spk 4 emself, im goin with Dirty Sally....

She took this one easy.......Don't 4get i took away moltens WORST bar, to help him, and so the scores would come out fair....


My Vote = Dirty Sally


pce

hmmm....Molten had some good punches.....and attempted wordplay...but some of them didn't really connect at all (supermarkets line is one i remember).....Sally had better personals and a good flow.....so here's a breakdown

Vocab - Tie
Wordplay - Molten
Punches - Tie
Metas - Molten
Rhymescheme - Sally
Flow - Sally
Personals - Sally
Complexity - Molten
Creativity - Sally

due to a majority going to Sally i have to say my vote goes to her....nice battle from u two though....

peace
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