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i'll post mine as soon as its done.....peace dawg!
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My record was 3-3, half an hour before, to the minute//
Should have battled ‘Rav’ for all, would be 6-0 with 1 imm-inent//
Like shadows in the night you distort and try to fright//
Then I turn on the bulbs, flood ya space with me-ta-pho-ric light//
Like an Indian medicine man, I’ma bout to free your mind//
Send ya to the other side, with ya own kind, deaf, dumb and blind//
This aint your vocation, dun jumped the line before ya makin//
Get back over the fence from WORTH IT to STOP TRYING YA FAKIN//
No good tryin to ban me, cos I don’t cheat in this RB//
Leavin ‘Ravenous’ hungry, cos aint never gonna stomach this MC//
Pretend you’re the ‘butcher’ and I’m the razor sharp knife//
Without me your useless, no more carving ya blunt for life//
No my name isn’t a woman’s, so don’t make that mistake//
Still gonna murk RavenousButcher leave him pissing in his quake//
This crazy kid thinks he can really give some decent spit//
The only way he does that, is cos he’s got a fuckin lithsspp!………

To all you little battlers, i'm hoping that you learn from this,
And witness how i turn this bitch,to buckets full of sperm and piss,
I noticed that you studied, I cot you copying my literature,
You stroke and rub my style, steady jacking off my signature,

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Deva? or DEEVA? actually your neither,
I'm hotter than the fever, turn your doc into a believer,
You tossed me what you could,and then i gave it to the stands,
Then the second that you loose,like the CUBS"you blame the fans,
Your a like child at a punk show ,lost in the Mosh,
And when I crush your bones, there used for stock in a Broth,
So quite re-using what i said because makes you look so pitifull,
I knew i smelt a "HERB" and i don't need no anti-Hismanol
You typed your verse, it wasnt dope, i wonder what the fuck your strutting for?
Listen i'm "the Butcher"your the turkey on the cutting board,
And when i'm finished my career you'll catch my name up in the "hall of fame"
I put this punk to shame ,and dragged his carcuss like a
ball and chain,

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Close Battle.Both Were Equal With The Punches And Metas But Im Goin To Go With Ravenous.His Verse Was A Bit More Comeplex.

Vote-RavenousButcher

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ok very close battle but if i had to choose:

punches- same

flow- same

structer- ravenous

overall- ravenous

have to say now deva spat some good lines
"Like shadows in the night you distort and try to fright//
Then I turn on the bulbs, flood ya space with me-ta-pho-ric light//"
clearly put a lot of effort into his verse
"No good tryin to ban me, cos I don’t cheat in this RB//
Leavin ‘Ravenous’ hungry, cos aint never gonna stomach this MC//
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was real impressed by the way he predicted what butcher was gonna use gainst him
"No my name isn’t a woman’s, so don’t make that mistake//
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ending was ok
Ravenous i think lost track of his flow a few times
that n the lines i qouted from deva makes me give him the vote

vote=deva

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85024

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