lets do this

your like a damn camel when you send a verse and your spittin-it,
expect nothin but wackness from this man's verse but im hittin-it,
my little sister can beat your freestyle my freestyle can beat your writtin-shit,
your just a fagget that happins to be alliterate,
if i didnt rip u in this battle, that would be considerate,
cause id have to be the wackest motherfucker on planet-earth,
to lose to you but before i go on just know my punch landed-first,
u couldnt come hard at me if u wacked off for six-days,
youll get devoured like chips.. so my next battle i can spit-Lays,

provocitivethink he the ONLY STAR the WAY this DUDE CON-A-VERSE (converse)//~1
he SPIT SHITTY like TOILETS-IN-REVERSE,heAINT a”TITAN"if he SAID A KEARSE(curse)//~2
HE. be SAYIN HELLO, before he SUCKS DICK, kus he wants to be A "HI-JACKER//~3
I spit FLAMES at him till THIS WHITE DUDE becomes A FIRE-"CRACKER"//~4
Only WAY he be THROWIN-UP-SCRIPTS is if he was A BELEMIC ACTOR//~5
Provocitive is just anotha white dude from Canada who wants to be a rapper(o well)~6
HE gets caught FONDLING HIS KEYBOARD so he can STROKE KEYS (Alicia keys)~7
I CAP him FOUR TIMES like BROKE KNEES, and MOLD him LIKE OLD CHEESE~8
HE don't want none of Marv amen. Cus a BIGGER GAP between our SKILLS than a TOOTHLESS GRIN//~9

aight we post posted out shyt lez get this votin on n' poppin u kno the rules

fisrt to 5 wins
3-0=ko

prov, your verse was pretty way, there just wasn't any flow to it and your punch lines were weak

[your like a damn camel when you send a verse and your spittin-it,
expect nothin but wackness from this man's verse but im hittin-it,]

to open a battle you want a strong line, this is terrible,... rhyming the same word!......

må®vë£öµs your verse ahd better structure and slightly harder hittin punches, so i would give the vote to you, but both of you need to elevate sum........

1-0 my lead,..........................................> need votes for this battle

~early~

anybody???

not bad battle, but ya set it up wrong so it doesn't matter who I vote for cos it won't count..........but I woulda voted for marvellous

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sigs are for herbs...Thats why I got one!

2-0 my lead and votes still need ed

pz

^^^^^ wut he said

uppin this battle

damn

yo provocitive im done uppin this battle

flow=provocative
punches=marvelous
structure=marvelous
creativity=marvelous
wordplay=provocative
overall=marvelous

aight well marvelous got it cuz he threw harder punches and prov bit off Juice a little bit more then enuff----