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verses due in 30 minutes

give me ten lines this cat'll be done in no time/
like a minute man, he's got off while waiting in line/
crying to his momma, "this cat straight up merked me/
momma I need some loving now, cum on now and jerk me/
work me momma, you know just how to do/
suck me off before I stick my dick in your hole of pooh"/
why hate on your mom though, cause I pounced it the other night/
she renamed me "Total Clit Killa" (TCK), sayn I totally worked it right/
but fuck you dawg, i'm out, let you suck on my dick/
the same one with which I wore out your momma's clit/

your lack of skill leaves ya style unrealistic/
your too simplistic, i'll turn you into a statistic/
scary ass flows leave you shittin in ya diaper/
rhymes hit you like a bullet from this lyrical sniper/
mah spitz are blazin ya ass beyond recognition/
im still in tha first quarter and your waitin for intermission/
when i log into RB you alwayz evacuate/
dont procrastinate, your tha one ima assassinate/
you just no-show when it comes to havin skillz/
i spit flowz so hot they leavin you with chillz/
you a rookie in this game and im puttin you to shame/
i'll throw you in tha dog pound wit a leash made of flames/
sorry i wasted a rhyme tha first tyme but you cheated/
newbies first post votes for you i couldn't believe it/
i thought if i battled you i'd get some competition/
but it seemz like you already in critical condition/

nice spit....upp this for some pollls.....~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Weak..

Spit.. your a sick mother fucker.. fa real.. Whats with all the momma shit.. its gay.. quit it.. there werent any really hard hittin punches.. weak.. tck got this.. for his vocab.. complexity.. just an overall better verse..

thought spits verse was waek, there were no hard hittin punches and the structure was all to fuck, the simplicity of it was just bad.
T.C your verse had a good flow goin on and it hit harder, an all round better drop....so i'd vote=T.C....
thats if i could...........lol......peace!

oh yeah forgot, could you both go hit these up.....plz

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86349
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86229

Spit that was really weak it was all about his momma that shit was gay t.ck got it with way better punches and vocab you need to elevate spit but so do i :s

yeah i know it was wack....it's straight though....just being goofy....PEACE~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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ok T.C.K...nice free posting....

fuck this shit, i'll come again, spit another few lines
i don't care if it counts, son you run out of time
step to me, i'll bust a cap with my lyrical nine
break you into 5 pieces like 50 cent into dimes
you still a little league spitters but bust like you got a promotions I’m still tha head knock, ain’t been touched in an off-tha-head drop
Leave you sayin “maybe next year” every time like tha Boston Red Sox
Becuz I “yank-these” Braves from New York down to Atlanta
You toss stones at these amateurs but not bold enough to throw tha hammer
My way, I spray diligently on these spilling, killing sprees
Couldn’t burn my style if you multiplied yours by a million degrees
Seriously, I cast out devils but I’m killing emcees
(Literally), from Boys to Men I have em’ all “On Bended Knee”
And extend tha fee to a larger degree when you plan to rap son
Cuz if you throw punchlines my way you gonna definitely “pay” for that one

i do believe that tck took this...spit4one...you first one was just wack...your second was a lot better, but that junk don't count.....wackness emergency

That was a weak battle. But TCK took this his wordplay and punches were better. Spit next time put some multies and metas in there to spice up your verses. Keep dropping and you'll elevate. My vote goes to TCK

Return the favor alright and vote here-

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86384

thx DS

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What the fuck is this?

give me ten lines this cat'll be done in no time/
like a minute man, he's got off while waiting in line/

HIs first 2 lines in his first verse

fuck this shit, i'll come again, spit another few lines
i don't care if it counts, son you run out of time

^^ his first 2 lines in his second vese''TOOO weak to vote on
u all suk'
tck tookit