10 lines
no d/r, hate or crew votes
no feedin
you spit first
I kill you

check the other thread dawg, I didn't mean to jump the gun, but already smashed on ou with like 20 bars. Try and keep up I guess.

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I'm the truth when I spit it in the booth/
Like Clue, and Whoo Kid, Oracleez on some new shit
Gimme a new click, O he spit it roothless
My freestyle spit show you how bitch your recruits is
Exclusive, Mainstream nigga get used to it you
We run thru clicks, break down zips, get used to it
Take wilds trips, take wild chicks, get used to it
And touch so much chalupa we hardly know to do with it
You nigga's holding product, we noticed you barely moving it
Since we moved in went from making money to losin it
Since we two men let's handle the buisness duking it
Or we could be two gangsta's, I got no problem with shooting it
Sure this block, been your spot, can you stop us from moving in
Can you switch your place, or just stay stuck on the losing end
Or maybe we look like somebody you wanna make a friend
Thinking of a way for you and your paper to make amends
Come around my way "spitwhackular" and get laced again
Oracleez, King of the Huns ain't no replacing Him


I am the One

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first of all, the limit was 10 lines, so that gets you dq'd right there. Secondly, that was the herbist battle rap I seen in a while, there's no fuckin punches at all, you just straight rappin.

But no worries, I'll merk you right now. Post your little verse in here and I will put up mine after.

you ain't a emcee OR A KILLA, just a wanna be herb dyin
from the very first word spit outta ya mouth, you start lyin
they call you "the hun" cuz you softer than egg yolk runnin
like a pride parade, yo ass is where the gay folk commin
I never shoulda took a challenge from a newbie so bitch-made
I heard better english from Billy Bob Thorton in Swing-Blade
you tried your hardest did ya? kid ya just not impressive
I'm depressin like a phone call from jail that gets disconnected
Better luck next time, if you get anotha shot at the throne
for now, bow down Ora, while you catch a kick to the dome

easily spitacular
punches,flow,sustainment,and all
no need to explain
where was the punches from the other kid?blah
vote=spit....nice verse feelin it


make sure ya hit this up plz...cheers
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4656#post854656

yo can one of ya'll cats hit up the battle above wid an honest vote seen as tho ive hit this up............pz

dam spit tok this in all categories, no need for a breakdown
yp orakilla this is a battl site, not just a freestyle contest, besides that shit seemed prewritten anyway

poll vote =spitacular
nice verse spit, nice punches, flow, everything

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punches.........spit
metas/wordplay/similes..........spit
flow.............both

spit takes this easily, and kid take a hint, u cant ryhme useless werds together your entire verse!

Spit hit this up honestly bro nobodies on IM countin on ya peep

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86828

I cant vote so you'll have to ask chrit to add mine but Spit took it easily on everythin. Other kid looks like he could be an easy win if all his verses are like that.

Vote spit

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1940 - 2002

In Respect

I'll keep it real, this was my first battle in rb so I just tested the water with a lil' pre writ. Believe though spit, you have exposed yourself and I know your weaknesses. You aren't ready for my true power. I will wait, bide my time. But I will rise to power, in this world of nerd backpack rhymers.

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