Ok 12 line battle
Normal Rules
and Whatever it was.

To Noncombatants: Don't freepost in link or even post before verses are dropped

yo I might go first cause you taking forever

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*Check His Profile for Personals* -------> Dont Forget

Your records almost at a Ratio of Five losses to Five Wins
In this struggle 1 of us will Die, like Seperatin Simeze Twins
Weak Record, Ya been pushed around more than False Accused Cop Arrests
A middle weight with no Talent, This kid doesnt Qualify for his Own Interests (Profile)
MC couldnt Serve me Good as a Busboy packin Vege-ta-bals
Ur an Immigrant wit out his Greencard, ya words aren't Ele-ga-bal
Putting u outa the game like 5th Stage Concusion Hockey-Patients
Kid doesnt know wuts goin on, He put a Battle record as his Occupation (Profile)
Ur gettin Insulted worse than Mafia Members who use to Shoe Shine (goodfellas)
Encountering a 'Crop Field Cut by Aliens' n' U Still wouldnt Know a 'Sign' (Signs)
I'de end your Running Streak but you dont have one like Washed Up Pens..........Ya Record Sucks........ The Closest U'll be 2 the Charts is watchin B.E.Ts Top Ten (Avatar)
Hittin you wit No sympothy like Empty Bumb Hats who Limp-for-Cents
Please kid your Unable to 'Beat Me', MC's battlin a Case of 'Im-po-tents'

Ur turn kid

Face the Music, Your Rhyme scheme just isn’t enjoyable.
I know why your name is thorn, Cause your (punches are) avoidable.
I’m violent, My punches are painful to history like Adolph.
But your hits (punch) keep the crowd silent like PGA golf.
Brutalize and Move your eyes straight to the Horizon
He calls Verizon, to get a guys to scrutinize them.
Your rhyme value is zero your hero is probably Rambo.
Your callow, I’d burn your marrow with my Erupting Flambeau.
I’m LARGE, and Thick, You can claim to have a dick.
But with a name like that I could tell you have a little prick.
Sick, Over Planetary, the Astronomer has spoken.
Your spits is arid like Mars and your winning streak has been broken

I don't want to edit and let you say shit but I made an error on line 6. so voters please undermind it.

LET THE VOTING COMMENCE!!!

LoL

Nice personals, Didnt expect a decent verse from you bro


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nice battle ya'll short and snappy which i like....breakdown=
punches=thorn
personals=thorn
metas=thorn
sustainment=thorn
flow=both
structure=emcee
creativity=thorn
vote=thorn

should've been harder emcee.....especially the p.g.a line..that was pretty wak...but props to ya both...pz

have a look at this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86489

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If you think I'm not uppin' its not that I usually wait until more ppl are on to Up a battle so don't think anything negative about me.

BTW. VOTE ON THIS AND DROP A LINK

He speaks the truth, though I hate Bri.

Please hit this up:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86795

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Appreciate Brix's vote but don't like quotes. Brix's vote was partially good because he gave a suggestion to one of the emcees on what was wack. But would like a tip for better battles and a better understanding on what took the battle. Please no more quote votes. Uppin'

By the way, Astronomy is my major. Thats why I said Astronomer.
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