10-20 lines
first to 5 votes
no crew votes and no dr's
i'll spit first

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aight here it is....

Yo fuck you, you fuckin' wanksta//
Just cause you wear a little blue don't make you a gangsta// those ugly bitches riden wit you don't make you a playa//
I'm like cow on a meat hanger//
Straight up RAW//
and my slugs are powerfull enough to rip off your fuckin' Jaw//
Just cause you a newbie~don't expect any sympathy//
I'm gonna leave you and your crew dead, and boke after this robberie//
Cause i'm gettin' hasty~to leave this clip and barrel completely fuckin' empty//
What the fuck were you thinkin', volentierin' to go against m.B.p.//
ya'll can't reach my skill even in a dream//
you pussy's are like scream~ all fuckin hollywood//
Ya bitches ain't ever been to tha real hood//
I dare ya to come see me~in LBC//
you best believe~you're gettin lead staight though your stomach, liver and your spleen~fuck it though sence you're pussy, i'll just leave you dead on line 15//

10 Lines and then you go away crying herb.

No flow, what were doing?, eating creamy jelly rolls and ho-ho's/
On loan, ya borrowed the rhymes but still you only spit slo-mo/
0-3 an stil don't undestand, ya verses are like Cricet, low demand/
Give a hand, the lines almost equal, rap like country band stand/
Cripple you with hard words, wrech ya spin with venemous verbs/
This ain Revenge Of The Nerds, Ya suck dude, havent you heard?/
Stop the shots, ya glock aint cocked, ya got the saftey on cock/
Watch while you get mocked, freeze up with stage fright and lock/
Ya blood dranin and ya skin white, ya dead dude, died of fright/
Murderd at 14, that aint to young, ya from the hood, but I won/

Don't underestimate the noobs.

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Uppin for some votes, people, lets get some fuckin votes in here, just cuz we noobs don't mean we can't get votes.

[1] Uppin...

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Wow, you people really have no clue how to vote or anything like that? I mean just cuz we new don't maen that we can't get vtoes, so lets get some votse in here.

[2] Uppin...

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[3] Uppin for some stupid votes, come on people it really isant that ard to vote, so lets get some votes in here please.

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Alright, now this is just getting really FUCKIN ANNOYING, FUCKIN VOTE ON THIS BATTLE GOD DAMNIT, I AWNT TO BATTLE OTHER PEOPLE AND I ALREADY HAVE 2 OPEN SO FUCKEN VOTE ON THIS DAMNIT!!!!!!!

[4] UPPIN FOR SOME GODDAMN VOTES.

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Least uppin and you all are pissing me the fuck off, just vote on this damn, you guys were new once, so lets get some votes in here please.

[5] Uppin for some mother fuckin votes.

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hmm......merking?

structure - vin
flow - vin
punches - vin
vocab/complex - tie
metas - tie i guess......

overall vin easily i think

Pace.......

punches-vindictive
flow-vindictive
personals-vindictive
needs to elivate-mbp

vindictive got this easy,mbp you seriously need to elivate, your never gonna win a battle with verses like that,

anyway my vote- vindictive

hit this up wit a honest vote, gettin mad slept on

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85996

lol mocked...... son..take it easy lil man youll get votes be patient
there werent really any mets and punches or anyting
so... vin for better flo...............................

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vote = vindictive

this battle was 1 sided..........................

you vind got this shit mbp you need to work on your flow it would've been alot closer if your flow had of been nice and consistant

vind that was a nice verse the inlines you had were ficking nice

vind got it on punches and flow