14 lines max
no hate or all those whack votes
no quoting votes
no whack votes...must explain...or...
ur just gay if u don't... yup................
dont' feed... ya

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hi his name is whack white cat, trynna rap
hit guys from the back, make doods ass clap
going rat-tat-tat layn on your back
bendn over coming back up making snap
like snapple bottle cap, tryn to pop
askn to give a dude another blow job
whether you blow a lot or suck a little
gettn raped like Kobe with a girl with vittles
stuck between her teeth, white trash
lookn for a blow up doll, wanting to bash
suck a dick, smoke some hash
take another dick for another wad of cash

I'ma make him swallow his pride instead of him spittin-4-one,
Opener sealed this fun...I'd play with the trick but the treat is passed on...




Then again i'm a greedy kid...Snatch what you've got,
The way you come so poor...I guess i won't gain a lot,
You behold matchboxes to spark this enraging flame,
But you won't catch nothin...Like you engaging to my name,
I'll slow down so u catch up...no we got a picture finish,
You ain't go win...But consider me generous fo lettin u in it,
Forget it, This kid is worthless like puttin druggies in rehab,
It only takes seconds to get the L back in ya grasp,
He's hot n bothered, burnin fumes like his alias was Havoline,
Swallow this shit... n you'll be hurlin up like a javoline,
Shh..this is hunting season, i'm spreadin love thru arrows like cupid,
Not romance but of satisfaction of killin herbs stupid

vote.............Hi
grammer...........Hi
Flow.............Spit
punches.........neigher
metas...........Neigher
creativity.............Hi

Close battle

Hi My Name is Go Reply to my thread in Bitch Slapped

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Flow: Tie
Structure: Tie
Metas: Neither
Punchs Hi..kinda
Multis: Neither
Enjoyment: Hi

Vote: Hi

Hit took this..like thorn said pretty close...but hi definatly deserves the vote..he had more hits..cant really call em punchs tho..read much better n...Spit was to basic..n rhymed to much for them lil lines..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87517

Hit that up or ill come back buggin^^

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lol this wasn't even close....
u guys need 2 learn how 2 vote...
small lines? no1 likes extended lines...
dumbasses...newbies before...
you drop another vote...please...
read somethin in elite...please

Looks like i aint ever votin on any of your battles again......me n thorn voted fo ya...what the fuck ya talkin about...put that crack down

name...fuck....who you calln noob....you a dumbass.....sometimes the tighter faster rhyme is better....why don't you go read something in elite....look at your battle record dumbass....you a big shot? fuck, you still elavatin too

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every1 in here is a newb... ask some vet....
you guys didn't even judge personals....
personals r what wins a battle....
n i don't care about those 2 votes i got...
they were shitty fo real...u need to learn how 2 vote better...
seriously.....
some1 said i didn't have punches? lol kids is funny...
but...don't come in here n post more....
that will just clog the thread....

name.....you are no fuckn vet.....show me a personal other than your first two lines.....fuck you...you can't even do many personals on text battles cause you don't know nothn bout the cat...can't see him, nothn....soo fuck you.....if you can't take a vote against you, go get back on your momma's tit