ait here it goes

20 lines no more no less
no hate
no dickride
no nothing

ALL votes must be explained

voting as follows:

opener-
closer-
punches-
personals-
wordplay-
vocab-
creativity-
overall-

here i come....dont feed herbal cuz i know you saw this when i first threw it up here...stick ur verse up and lets get the votin goin on...

I Think it, script it, then bring hell upon a fag
This battles like candy at a kids party, ?I got it in the bag?

Im the tightest outta el centro, no one does it any better
Ya head ?bobs? on so much cock, they startin to call you ?cheddar?

Im the one HERBAL looks up to, the father he admires
Burnin this ?homes?* up like San Berndu county?s wildfires!

Busted a nut in his mom and made her scream for mo dick to eat
Ya momma?s like a bad Halloween night, all trick and no treat

Ya see? Halfway in and im sure ur bitch ass is defeated
Im like tha Miami hurricanes, constantly stayin top-seeded

HERBAL u started battling but u need tah pick a new hobby
Just to get through reading ya shit, I need at least 2 cups of coffee

Ya punches are still sloppy and ya rhyme-scheme is shot
Quit usin those big words, we know they comin outta that dictionary u bought

HERBAL?s a ?sham?, his raps r ?poo?, ima literal asshole cuz I straight shit on you
Drop the act quit actin a foo, admit ur weak cuz we all know its true

Quit jockin ya name, all tha bitch did was turn her head when ya needledick dripped
Tah think, ya birth coulda been avoided if my condom wouldn?t ah ripped

Or if ya mom wouldn?t ah stripped and got my dick all hard
Book me on a ?special? case of homicide cuz I just killed a ?RETARD?

*homes=homeboy but like 'sup homes!' ...man u all know...

Pupils of RB expose this canibus biter/
Wacker than big tymers, full of one liners//
Not a lover nor a fighter just a malnutrioned minor/
You cause more controversy than T.O. with the Niner's/
Unwanted like a wrestler known as Rowdy Rody Piper//
Go cypher, cuz skill is something you just don’t posses/
Be my guest & test though its something I don’t suggest/
My verse-be killin you diversely & yours is taken in jest//
A no namer! living In S.B.? so ure obviously a “Flamer”/
A tamed-herb If rap is a game then you’re a non-gamer//
Ure so predictable wat a shame you disdain my name/
Spittin some played out shit for fame coming out lame//
Theres no gimics wit me Ill serve you on a platter/
You’re about as hopeless as an obese eatin himself fatter//
*Arrogant?* Spittin shit irrelevant but you’re hesitant/
No worries battlin u cuz beatin u…I never CANT//
Double negative in lit composition causin incissions/
Heres my proposition take this “L” and go missin//
U must think ure *Tom* cuz this is an impossible mission/
Corpses vision cuz you seeing me as your mortician//

Arrogant-he and his lil friend call themselves "tha arrogant ones"
tom-cruise

Punches...........Both
Structure..........Herbal
Flow.................Herbal
Creativity.........Herbal
Similes.............Both
Played mama lines............AMOZ
Vote.................Herbal


Funniest Line

HERBAL u started battling but u need tah pick a new hobby
Just to get through reading ya shit, I need at least 2 cups of coffee



herbal please hit my battle up with Capcom honestly, thanks bro I ovted on this.

herbal u forgot to poll bro

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5446#post875446

opener-amoz
closer-herbal
punches-herbal
personals-herbal
wordplay-herbal
vocab-herbal
creativity-amoz
overall-herbal

no hate amoz but herbals was alot better
i would vote but i dont got 100 posts yet...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=2
honest vote plzz

thanks for vote


uppin like a mug #1

opener-Amoz
closer-tie
punches-tie
personals-Herbal
wordplay-Amoz
vocab-Herbal
creativity-Herbal.....Amoz was played
sturcture-Herbal
multi-Herbal
enjoyment-Herbal

overall-Herbal


no hate.........coo...............those songs on ya list ya fav Herb????

Begginin:herb
Finish:herb
Punchs:herb
Volcab:both
Structur:both
Wordplay:both

Over All:herb

yall was tight but herb come out on top

Yo check this battle and u post who u think one and shit.
Yaz vs Mc-UsKi

uppin #2 im off to sleep now anyway drop a vote and a link i promise to hit it up honestly!

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opener-amoz
closer-herb
punches-amoz
personals-amoz
wordplay-herbal
vocab-herbal
creativity-amoz
overall-i think amoz did have some played momma lines---but he had a setup and a punch on each line in otherwords a more consistent spit. my vote=amoz

good battle ya'll
peep mine in the sig if ya haven't alredy and vote honest thanx

Punches...........Both
Structure..........Herbal
Flow.................Herbal
Creativity.........Herbal
Similes.............Both
Played mama lines............AMOZ
Vote.................Herbal


can yall hit this up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88771

yo I'd have to go fo herbal,
betta punches, that hit harder
the otha kat's shit was kewl though, no hate
probs to both of ya
ya closer was hot herbal, the otha kat needs some more vocab cuz it kinda lacked

vote - herbal

wat the fuck personals??? ure an idiot lol
creativity????? um can u spell PLAYED?
lol no hate good shit

uppin#3 come on im about to win and shit this should have been a KO