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10-28-03, 09:05 AM | #1 | ||||||
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Mystik Mind VS Feeble Minded
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10-28-03, 01:20 PM | #2 | |||||||
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10-31-03, 06:15 PM | #3 | ||||||
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your lines are drooping, and your rhymes aren't lucrid
cuz only time your mentioned is when someone says... get outta here.. u beat hottie and feel special? then just try son guess ya whole life was pussy.. u were born in & just died one u suck, bow down & praise w/ love cuz ur careers getting cut short.. ^ kinda like the phrase above im lazy, duh.. but move faster thru, own u, all these bastards do cuz like food on the other side of the table.. everyones passing u but faggot do, you come staggering through, im dragging you its pretty bad when ur verse is more boring than my rb mag review.. bet you didn't see that coming though - u froze my doubts cuz u didnt close off the rest of the world.... the world closed u out |
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11-01-03, 08:41 AM | #4 | ||||||
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bit like you
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11-01-03, 09:15 AM | #5 | |||||||
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the 'im with stupid' line was funny = )
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11-01-03, 01:12 PM | #6 | |||||||
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? whered that come from . whatever. dont matter... |
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11-02-03, 04:39 AM | #7 | ||||
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i see he no-showed but i'll have my say anyway..
your lines are drooping, and your rhymes aren't lucrid cuz only time your mentioned is when someone says... ^^ very nice opener (funny) get outta here.. u beat hottie and feel special? then just try son guess ya whole life was pussy.. u were born in & just died one Ok line, didnt really get the wordplay though u suck, bow down & praise w/ love cuz ur careers getting cut short.. ^ kinda like the phrase above ^^ILL i liked this line a lot im lazy, duh.. but move faster thru, own u, all these bastards do cuz like food on the other side of the table.. everyones passing u ^^^^OK wordplay but not as dope as the rest but faggot do, you come staggering through, im dragging you its pretty bad when ur verse is more boring than my rb mag review.. ^^ LMAO bet you didn't see that coming though - u froze my doubts cuz u didnt close off the rest of the world.... the world closed u out ^^ nice closer probably my favourite lines of the verse |
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11-03-03, 08:17 AM | #8 | ||||||
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Feeble Wins
Mystik Loses & Is Out Of The League For No Showing Battle Closed |
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