10-15 lines max
'30 mintes to drop
pc
checkininiininin ity in

let me go smoke ill be back

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checki in bitch
an spit

ight w/e.... heres ma check in... i will have me shyt up and ready to ur ass........ BITCH........................................

"Aus" here be "pak n heat" under his belt for a win//
i bomb "da illest ville"*, and make way wit ur corpse again//* he says he from da illest ville.
pre-written ur shyt just to "pak" a quick victory//
i "whip" this kid, and he nickname me "hickory"*//**they whip people with hickory sticks.
link ur "fist" to ur "mouth", so u can get a "punch spitten"//
ur shyt is wack so "edit" ur post, think bout it, then "written"//
Dont fuckin think ur badass, or that u hard as "nails"//
if so then call me "MC HAMMER" cause i ram ur shyt till it de rails//
to end this, i conseal "heats" life in "flames" like a weapon//
douse his faggit ass, then send him 6 feet deep he be reppin....


blah......

aus...... outie

aite...


YA newb.i no the truth i merk herbs,l creatin danger//
ill switch my nine wit rhymes an put ten in da chamber//
AUs you can call me the "fire-starter" how i defeat this dead-beat//
Leave ya red-meat, cuz im spittin-harder,flames wit my lyrikal-heat//
I left ya corpse in a hacthet near ya casket, Buried Beneath the floor//
Im blastin verbal vinicular man slaughters,try an a say a punch i havent said be4//
YA net cee record is FAlse homie, i no your a phony cuz your weak an wak//
PLus it hasnt occured to u that ill beat u before the weekend pasts//
My stragegery is savagry as im shottin holow tips at ya team//
YA games rotten.leavin ya brains poppin, wit da infar red beam//
my spits come viscious cuz ill a menace at this rap game//
Ill tear u apart at da stiches winning at the end of this sentence cuz u cant rap mayne//


fuk off bitch
wutvea i came weak

lol...... u try to start beef and i dont even fuckin know u homie....... plus... nvm..... i aint sawin shyt.... let the votes come in......

^^LOL
ok
let da votes begin let em speak for em selfssssssssssssssssss
nugga
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lololololol ya i like what pak said/.....let the votes speak............................................. ..................................

ok this was a good battle for 2 newbs..

Punches= PAK
Flow= Pak
Stucture= Pak
Creativity= Pak
Personals= None
Overall= PAK N. Heat

keep the good shit up mayne..Pz

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i didnt have to read pak's whole verse to kno he got this...
nice verse..
"YA newb.i no the truth i merk herbs,l creatin danger//
ill switch my nine wit rhymes an put ten in da chamber//"
^^ill
altho pak u kinda fell off towards the end.. no hate good verse
aus it was a iight verse.. keep elevating ..

hit this w/ a honest vote plz:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88602

opener-good shit Pak N Heat
closer-tie
punches-Pak
best line status-Pak...chamber
enjoyment-Pak
originality-Pak
personals-think i saw Pak hit one

just cuz dude took all the categories doesnt mean this was a blowout....good shit by both

vote-Pak

ight its kewl...... nice verse pak n heat...... no hate or anything ma man....... nice job... peace out...

fosho uppin for my first win
thanks man
good battle
it was tite.............................................. .....................holla

Begginin:pak
Finish:aus
Punchs:pak
Volcab:pak
Structur:pak
Wordplay:pak

Over All:pak

this was a tight battle on paks behalf, but aus has some goos shit, just pak's better

Yo check this battle and u post who u think one and shit.
Yaz vs Mc-UsKi