check?

yea, this is my check in, hopefully u'll type it up shortly so maybe we can some votes in tonight. Good luck pz

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reppin strong, wurdshizle

this punk thinks hes a rebel, his shit is just whack
all this mans got is treble and a copy of new jack
da most ill, ha? i dont think so compared to most
i will kill, leave nothing for your fams but a ghost
youre rocking the old filas from ross dress for less
youre mocking the old game, damn its a fuckin mess

Lol ok, I do appreciate u spittin now so we can get some votes in, here is mine, 8lines:


Like "Nike" the best part of ur verse could be "check, check"//
This sneakHERB's punches will "never hit", always "on deck"//
Ur no prospect, no lines of yours will have an effect//
Like a "blind man tryin to box" ur punches will "never connect"//
With that, a loss u deserve, a win for me I'll preserve//
Compare this battle to "tennis" cause u about to get "served"//
Ur punches aren't "sharp", they "needle"(need a little) experience//
No coherence, expect a "W?" RBs only laughin at ur verse's appearance//


EXPLANATIONS:

Nike sneakers are known for the checks, basically the logo.
For the simple mind, a needle is sharp.
In tennis, a serve is a stroke.


Ok, let's get some votes

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One more thing, refer the "hit" as to "hittin a baseball w/ a bat." On deck, means ur next, a prospect means a new guy who is considered good and will be watched. Let's get some votes, and all votes must be explained.

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Upppppppppppppppppppinnnnnnnn this shyt. Please don't sleep, drop a link n I'll put in an honest vote (1)

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reppin strong, wurdshizle

This is Loke 101 I am gonna be completly hones. I give this battle to DaIllestRebel not because me and Catch are going at it but because Catch his style is trash he doesn't make any since.
DaRebeles flows flowed much better they were much cleaver they rhymed and all

Flat out Catch got his ass beat LOL

Goddamn.... Catch, u need to get sum1 to help u
refreshen ur skillz dawg. Ur just gonna get plain old ripped.
But to tha battle...

Flow = DaIllistRebel
Structure = DaIllistRebel
Punches = DaIllistRebel

May I need to say more?

VOTE: DAILLISTREBEL

i just try, thats all i can do.



im a fucking newb.



all i can do is keep trying.



even if it all sucks.

i admit, these are the first 3 times i ever showed my shit to anyone so i cant realy say i give a fuck for my first 3 goes. i wasnt looking at meter at all

flow=daillest
creativity=daillest
wordplay=daillest
creativity=daillest

my vote=daillest....................catch try to use more wordplay in your verses

Yea, good battle catch, I understand that ur new, experience will definately help. And the locke vote will not count, I don't care who u voted for, if u have another battle with my opponent, then u can't vote on this battle. Appreciate the votes ppl and leave links if u want and I will vote on them.


Anyway uppin..............................(2)

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reppin strong, wurdshizle

hey DaIllist thanks for the upz^ and props...

ill keep trying

..please vote on us people!





how else are dumb newbs like me gonna get any better?????????

No problem catch, experience will help complexity.


Cmon, please hit up


uppin............................................. .(3)

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Ur not wack................ I'm just better


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reppin strong, wurdshizle