10 lines
no hate votes
no d/r votes
no crew votes

you spit first and i will drop tonight when i get home from work after you drop

Yo look,

Why choose such a lame name? I’ll flip ya ‘ken’ & break ya ‘nek’, & the ‘dawg’ must be cos you like to take a bone,
I’ve seen ya losses & they say bad luck comes in 3’s, but I got news for ya dawg it ain’t luck you shit, go home/
I’m callin you ‘saddam’ cos you fightin a loosin battle & I’m dropin verbal weaponry,
How you gonna beat me when your battle stats are higher than your IQ - minus 3/
I’ve seen ya skills & my conclusion is you should never give up ya ‘day-job’, stick to givin ‘hand-jobs’ & ‘blow-jobs’,
You’ll beef bout spittin gay shit but I go by reputation I heard you a ‘gay-snob’ who suck ‘mans-knobs’ yelling ‘don’t stop’/
I printed out your other rhymes & they mean a lot to me, I use them to wipe my ass when I got no toilet paper,
I tried selling ya rhymes as a childrens book but a 2 year old told me “it was too basic so I used it as a diaper”/
Last lines now, I don’t really need to finish ya cos ya feeling suicidal already but this was a mismatch like gravy & ice cream,
Sorry to kick ya when ya down but it’s funny, you cryin louder than ya girl when I boned her & that bitch gives a good scream/

OK dawg you up................................................ ...........................

You couldn't "dom-N8" this even if ya had 4 votes in advance..
The odds are against me then, and you still wouldn't stand a chance…
Im eating you up with my verse like I was a car-no-voir….
I honestly didn't wanna diss you, cause I didn't wanna harm-no-whore..
Arm-for-war, cause Im like superman i spit-words-of-steel...and i hit-verbs-to-kill...
cause I rip-herbs-at-will..while ya lift words imma make ya get-worse-with-skill..
i say, just-quit....cause if the toilet was a jail cell ya couldnt bust-shit...
and yes you better trust-this...cause ya left ya rhymes in the rain and they rust-quick…
From me Your never seeing-wack-shit, with my words your being-capped-quick..
Cause im beating you over and over like this was a reenactment…

Nice verses..now lets get some votes............................................. .................................................. ....

breakdown

punches - ken
flow - tie...
multies - ken
vocab/complexity - ken
enjoyment - tie...
overall - ken.....

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This should be close............................................. .................

Uppin, vote on this battle, then check this link it's bein slept on:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...highlight=domN8

Aight heres how this shit went.....

Flow: ken
Punches: ken
Vocab: ken
Enjoyment: tie

Overall: Ken

Good battle...
Punches: Ken
Flow: Tie
Structure: Ken
Personals: Dom
Vocab: Ken
Multies: Ken
Overall it was a good battle, pretty close, but i think Ken took this one, props to both, Vote: Ken Dawg

ya, Ken got dis, hands down on da win, disses were much nicer, punches were a few..simple but in dis case, didnt matter. other kats jus talked shit, a few colorful metaphors..but dats bout it.. so my v=Ken

Thanks for the votes............................................. ......anymore? ........................................

first thing ima say is dom your lines are way too strectched, which knocked the flow right off........you had some ok shit, some quite funny, so if this was on enjoyment you'd get it, BUT it aint so hard luck, cos ken came harder in ALL other aspect, with good flow and structure, so there it is dawgs.....vote=ken.........check ma shit....

Flow~Ken
Consistency~ken
Punches~Ken
Multis~Ken
Personals~No1
Vocabulary~Dom
Overall~Ken he got this wack battle but needs votes but no doubt ken got this

CAN U TELL ME HOW TA PUT DIS LINK IN MA SIG SO I C THE PIC

http://www.theartman.com/gangstas/original_gangstas.jpg

THANX FO DA HELP HOMIE

PEACE

heres how u went

vote - ken dawg

better punches, structure, and flow, he came out on tom with better opener n closing verses 2