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11-05-03, 02:46 PM | #1 | |||||||
I Am The Light
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[week4] Skiddz (1-0) vs B Kast (1-0)
IP: CB2E 7CE0
Topic: perfect chemistry
due date: saturday judging ends: monday make your words sound nice...
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11-05-03, 04:48 PM | #2 | ||||
Straight Savage.
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IP: 8BEC CACE
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Nice Topic.
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11-05-03, 07:01 PM | #3 | ||||
Straight Savage.
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IP: 8BEC CACE
I'll Post mines Now..
Perfect Chemistry My love, and my visions seeing as I'm a Writer My pen and my pad,make my strain much lighter I see it as, another way visualizing what I knew It's crazy, visualizing theses written in my book How maybe I can understand how I can change the planet it seems, more populated by deranged Criminals taking falls, writing in my book of songs Words that come from the heart,other people long We were made for each other, I don't feel it can be ended I try to excercise my mind, but it cost others to be seperated from what society accepts, until the day of their untimed death I see it as a perfect understanding, Of people seem to forget Relate to it, take it, I'm still looking forward to a challenge But like other's before me, brilliance is just reprimanded Jealousy, fueling our rage, disposal at our cost of our fuel Who knew I can interact like this with a pen, Who Knew? When I write down my thoughts, Passing through my mind And then it seems like the chemistry's working,at this time Acids running through my body, the mixtures making me up The cells in my vessels,more produced since its never enough Different types of elements,cells, atoms, ions, and molecules I thought I had the confidence, but then I'm Just ridiculed See, everything happens for a reason, even as I type Now Ripping through gas cells in the air, just realizing how One small thing effects another the chemistry is boiling Maybe One person's pain,comes at the other's enjoyment And maybe when I drop Open Mics, or whenever I recite Any work of mine, and never get respected that night Is just a perfect understanding of how our planet works One other persons happiness, is just a result of my hurts On a smaller scale, my mind still working to my perfection Maybe it's just the way I am thinking,just for My protection But whenever Imagination in me, is coming straight to life Ideas begin to work and result to something else,seems like everything has a purpose, when something else is working I found out that this results from Perfect Chemistry in a Person
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11-06-03, 08:05 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 39A0 9BDB
Ohhhh shit son, i jus remembered and been busy with school all week, but i'll get started and have it up by tomorrow.....
pce nice piece by the way..... and im still a newby at this.... |
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11-06-03, 09:00 PM | #5 | ||||
Straight Savage.
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IP: 8BEC CACE
^Please Don't No-Show, I'd rather lose to a good piece, then win by no-show.
Good Luck
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11-07-03, 02:11 AM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: EB0F D258
I'll start keyin up jus got back from school for the week ....
Won't be nearly as lnog as yours, im thinking like 16 lines, cause im goin out for the week-end pce Last edited by B-Kast : 11-07-03 at 02:16 AM. |
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11-09-03, 06:41 PM | #7 | |||||||
I Am The Light
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IP: DACA E3AE
hmmm no showed ay....congrats on the win skiddz
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11-10-03, 01:14 PM | #8 | ||||||
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IP: 7A52 73B1
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many battles have been too hard to decide on but not this one, lol Vote - Skiddz |
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11-10-03, 06:29 PM | #9 | ||||
Straight Savage.
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IP: 8BEC CACE
LoL....
But I don't feel special about it.
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11-10-03, 07:16 PM | #10 | ||||||
wanna play doctor????????
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IP: 4577 F972
this was long....
fo a 1 man battle... lol it was decent... but nothing great really... flow was ok, structure n all ya kknow ok... the quality of it was so so... but ya now... enuf fo the win! |
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11-11-03, 08:35 PM | #11 | |||||||
Jee-You Knit?
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IP: 0E58 6BB1
BKast is Suspended
Skiddz (2-0)
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