ite heres the deal
6 lines
house rules
hurry the hell up
u spit first

someone toss this rookie a cookie/
because hes the kind of kid that cant get any nookie//

I will make u wish u could stick the clit/
while I eat ur girls clit/
so fuck this shit this crakcer is gone throwing this shit at the rookie who's gone/

LMFAO...u canot be serious...

your a joke...a clown, who made me lose the remote
now i cant change the channel so ill swing for your throat
your forgetting strength...your powerless to fight back
your forgetting letters...you forgot the "e" in "whiterap"

this faggot makes me laugh with his wackness, till my laughters are screams
whitrap, that was honestly, the worst verse ive ever seen

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ite...hit this battle up with votes please
dont be afraid to drop your threads
but make sure to vote
....
please
thankyou

lets end this battle quickly so i dont have to keep uppin it

-junio

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uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhh

this is like
the fourth fuckin time a battle of mine gets slept on!
cumon voooote im anxious

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im usually not the one to complain...but this is god damn ridiculous, all my battles get slept on, there should be a change to the rules or somthn to make it smoother, all i do is wait for a vote

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this battle sucked so bad lol... Ive seen better from newbies... But yea. Junio, u got this one. U had better punches and flow. whitrap, u REALLY need to up ur skillz man. Honest Opinion... Honest Vote....

VOTE: JUNIO SIXNINE

Eh yo! This is Yaz's breakdown, check it:

Flow-junio sixnine
Multies-none
Structur-junio sixnine
Punchs-junio sixnine
Personals-junio sixnine
Volcab-junio sixnine
Opener-junio sixnine
Finisher-junio sixnine
Wordplay-junio sixnine
Enjoyment-junio sixnine
Overall-junio sixnine

[junio sixnine]
Dawg this was terrible, you could use some serois elavation.
but all in all, junio had this shit with better... well everything.
You can't exactly work much with 6 lines though, so like realy dawg. No hate or nothing.

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[whitrap]
This is the worst rap I have herd in my fuckin life, this shit was worse then n0obs. Dawg you need more elavation then junio sixnine, matter of fact, you need to just quit rap. No hate or nothing, I know you can't do much with 6 lines, but u got merked the fuck out.

~Hit Dees Polls Up~

Yaz vs Nitemarre
Yaz vs junio sixnine

K33P i¨® Cr@cKiN YO,
Peace (\1/)

lol
no...i dont need serious elevation....before i wrote my verse i knew all i needed was anythign close to a slight diss that rhymed...i didnt need to come close to my potention

but ya...hit this thread up...lets get it over with plz...and while u do so, make sure u post up your thread and ill take a look

[3]
-j six

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i wana close this thread so that i can have a new battle ill battle any of yall but for now pleeeeeeeaaaaaaaase vote....take a look its a hot battle lol....ill vote on your battle when the time comes, so vote [4]

i need 3 more votes
he needs 5

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WHITERAP WON A BATTLE????

GOTDAMN! Who the hell did he beat???

He sho' didn't win this one dawg....

Junio had better wordplay and everything...elevate the fuck up!

Oh and hit this........

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=90916

flow*69
disses*69
punches*69
vocab*69
structure*69

Vote*69

i couldnt poll vote but plz return tha honest vote plz
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=90810

cool...damn i wana close my threads up...YO...2 MORE VOTES, CUMON YALL LETS FINISH THIS SHIT UP...
and leave your threads posted here too....

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this was a merkin like whoa.........whitrap u need to get some wordplay and stop talkin about eatin another dudes girl.........go to emergancy whackness center...........u should find some good tips there.....................69 got this battle...........better punches wordplay creativity, etc...........

wack battle lol junio needs elevattion and whitrap lmao the name punchlines wack battle both elevate~1