8-10 lines max
no dickryde/hate/crew/fan votes
no recycling or biting
verse due 24 hours after thread is made (just in case one of us isn't online when thread is made)

peace
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check check kinda sleepy but check.......
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.......................grab some water for myself....
iight

checkin...



^^u ain't gotta post tonight if ur tired....

peace
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like an Off Flow CADIAC ARREST you dead Beat~
my BLAZIN Rhymes are like Cops, you Fled HEAT~
you ain't DROPPIN DOPE, like walkin thru with FEDS-in
-the-Streets~
I KICK mentally off the DOME, as if your HEAD-met-my-
FEET~

my PUNCHES landing HARD like feelin the concreted
PAVEMENT~
yea I'll KNOCK you Down MONEY, like a DOWN PAYMENT~

grab ya hands and Clap ya back, with CLOCKS touchin
ya SPINE~
then Spend you around in a CIRCLE, and made you TURN
back the HANDS of TIME~

dam DAWG{Dog} you been SPAYED, therefore you ain't commin
at me when I Bring Blaze~ and set you a STEP BACK like KIDS
who Sink GRADES~


.....i'm out g'luck!

^^ good shit
but ya shi wud just look unforced if u didnt caps all ya main words
in ya metas an shit
foreal
good shit
but smoka comes wit heat

Don't Get My Punches/Wordplay Or Personals...Don't Vote...Every Line Has It..Catch It!!

U A Transvestite Scarface, Bitch Got 'Play'ed Lines, Well I Just Bought 'Park Place'..
Talkin Shit?? Ur Breath Got A Fart Taste, So Much Silicone Even Her Hearts Fake..
'Pirated Prostitutes' On My Island So I'll Drop The Anchor On This 'Land-Hoe'..
U Got A Retards Punch..Ur Hands Slow, 'Drowned Thousands' With My 'Grand Flows'..
I Raped Ur Mother When She Was Pregnant, So Tonya Was Born With Stab Wounds..
Not Seein A WIN, So U MAC Whom? A Woman Tony Montana? This Drag's Doomed..
I Destroy Pipelines, U Must Wear Bongs, Only Grooms U Attract Are Haircombs..
U Ain't Gettin 'A Head', Claimin U A 'Man'....U Must 'Shave' With That 'Bare Dome'..
I'm Phat Like 'Bonecrusher's Fingers', U Can't Even Fit In The 'Ring' With Me..
Simply, I Spit 'Three Fold' Like A 'Old Fat Mans Gut' Ur Rhymes Are 'Wrinkly'..(old)

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90552

hit it up honestly..ill be back to vote.............
like i said before smoka u gunna drop ya shit or wut

^^i've already voted on that battle...lol....man i can't believe this is bein slept on......

peace
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ay who voted for you joka.....i don't see who explainin a vote!!!....
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good shit by tha way

^^me either....lmao...i think dude that replied forgot to explain when he said he would vote.....i'll PM him...or some shit...

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yea do that.........
thats fucked up !!!
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.....................holla!

i did i felt smoka had better punches
but nun the less tonya u came coo an all
but smoka just out did u in everything personals
punches mulites..not alot tho
V- smoka

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90529
^^it dont have a poll voting..so just drop a text vote if u peep

my honest breakdown......sorry for the missunderstanding in loke vs. PAK N HEAT battle tonya......coo

opener-tie...both were corny
closer-tonya
punches-hmmm...didnt like the punches but smoka gets it for not being as corny
personals-smoka
complexity-smoka
multi's-smoka
originality-tie...cuz tonya had played shit, smoka had transvestite shit
enjoyment-smoka



overall-smokajoka666.......no hate..just honest opinion peace

Hard 2 explain but I'll try.

Smoka's verse was tight but I didn't like the way it was structure, I didn't read ( and recited ) very well. but Tonya's way dope all the way. I aint the kinda cat that can give advice 2 ya smoka but you got some ill linez jus structure it better.

Peace