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11-05-03, 02:01 PM | #1 | |||||||
I Am The Light
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[week 4 championship match][Champion] Auspicious (3-0) vs Fgee (3-0)
IP: CB2E 7CE0
Topic: mind is not brain
Due date: saturday judging ends: monday hmm..make this nice...
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11-05-03, 02:32 PM | #2 | ||||
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In.
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11-05-03, 03:07 PM | #3 | ||||
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Mind Is Not Brain..
Also Means "In Your Head" His Mind Un-Right.. Thoughts In Depth.. His Time In Sight.. Brought Regrets.. Disregard The Dead.. Life He Sold.. Its In Your Head.. Like They Told.. ..What Was Told, Forgotten.. Pain Met Anguish.. Torchered His Soul.. Traded For Places.. Escorted Yet Bold.. Proctored In Anger.. Self Vault That He Hid.. Doctors To Strangers.. Tell That Fault Wasn't His.. Split Persons.. Diagnosed With Cause.. The Hurt Worsened.. By The Most w/ Flaws.. Case Wasn't Extreme.. Facts Proved It.. Faced His Beliefs.. Faced What Truth Is.. Young, He Was Told This.. All She Said.. He Had Begun To Get Scolded.. All In His Head.. ..Truth's Return.. He Grew.. Brought To His Youth.. He Threw.. Thoughts To The Truth.. Remained Calm.. Though Mind Astray.. Pain Palmed.. Throw Time Away.. Fumed In Hate.. Not Well Liked.. Assumed For Fate.. Shots Felt Light.. Turmoil Burned.. Twisted For Help.. Un-Foiled Turns.. Didn't Feel Like Himself.. Popped A Pill.. Didn't Know Why.. Stopped His Will.. Livin Slow By.. Eyes At The Tablet.. Head Of The Chamber.. Why Did He Have It.. Fed Him His Anger.. Questioned His Parents.. Blind Responses.. Defenses Apparent.. Rewind His Conscience.. "Nothing To Worry About.. Its All In Your Head.. Hurried With Doubt.. Before He Found Death.. ..In His Head No Longer.. Shoved In Answers.. Strangers Banished Him.. Was It Cancer?.. Or Anger Management?.. Stopped His Effort.. Believed What They Said.. Knocked In Pressure.. It Was All In His Head.. Threw The Prescription.. A Cure On His Own.. Knew The Description.. Pure But Alone.. Let Them Make Fun.. Mind Over Matter.. Let The Fate Run.. Life Posed To Shatter.. Resentment Ventured Back.. Halter Scene Thrown.. Tormented Centured Facts.. Alter Ego.. Vented In Rage.. Took Knives With His Depth.. Presented His Hate.. Took Lives To Their Deaths.. Proceeded His Method.. Murder Fluent.. Conceeded w/ Epics.. Deliver Un-Prudent.. No Remorse.. Something Centured, Nothing Blamed.. Slow Divorse.. Nothing Ventured, Nothing Gained.. His Knife Point Withered.. Due Soon Ten Gone.. His Lifes' Point Hindered.. To Prove Them Wrong.. ..The Verdict.. Trial He Sat.. Awaited His Sentence.. While He Had.. Waited Defenseless.. Wick Ran Low.. His Memory A Blur.. Wishes un-Known.. Temporarily Un-Sure.. Un-Certain Jury.. Read The Hand To Me.. Persons In Worry.. Plead Insanity.. As I Recall.. Took What I Had Said.. Pass To Them All.. "Looks Like Its Not All In My Head".. |
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11-05-03, 03:11 PM | #4 | |||||||
I Am The Light
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hmmm that was a bit fast....whatever...lol
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11-05-03, 03:54 PM | #5 | ||||
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Had 2 Periods In School To Do It
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11-05-03, 05:05 PM | #6 | ||||||
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i'll try to get it in 2moro
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11-06-03, 01:48 PM | #7 | ||||
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Good Deals
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11-07-03, 12:48 PM | #8 | ||||||
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Sorry this is long...i just got into the topic
goodluck Auspic Brian - anagram of Brain The brain houses the mind but they're foreigners in life Intelligence combined with emotions yet they're living a lie… Any problems take them to Brain not out he's in sane The logistic membrane stained by intellects reasonable reign When mind tricks commence he complains about the noisy neighbour Sick and tired of the capers continually under-mined by loves lost labour Green sphered jealousy no stranger Brian had a rendezvous w/ Depp Reshun She kept him second guessing outwitting him with her deep complexion Anaesthetised by her injection Brian became mentally unstable Her needle turned the tables and gravities floor bore the smashed fables Logical thoughts given a facial all reason evolved to a clutch of doubts Brain washed and dowsed left on tumble dry within skulls house He holds no bones now, reality has parted and returned as miseries trickery Multiple 3rd persons bickering Brian swelled up but felt like a pygmy His tongue frozen from delivery nerves of steel molten and shivering Goose bumps spread wings quickly and soar from aching bruises Mind hears the rumours and knocks on Brians window of oppurtunists The pane is hard to shatter by a purist but the portal is eventually opened Emotions rub shoulders w/ Brians nobles vying for the peace prize voters They leave Brian coated with strong feelings to break Depp Reshuns spell Dep Ression < well u can tell its helped but its not totally expelled Brians still in fragile health the Soothe sayers compelled to spread love with friendly knives Theres no edge to their drive just blunt druids who try to alleviate life Love always survives along with compassion and fighting spirit Brian absorbs the lyrics a livid remorse erupts making sense of gibberish Hostile intentions turn civic anger on the hob simmering at the back of his mind Evaporated in healing hands of time Brians ears begin to listen to the outside Cobwebs part as he spied her supply, audible comforts wrapped in cotton Caring words softened with Minds help not to be forgotten Brian owed such a lot n' promised to pay his mind more attention Shaking hands with the 'other' dimension Brian unlocked cells tension Released with loves drenchin Brian expanded his mentality Positive reality so elusive before opened arms gladly Embracing in a bare hug happily Brian and Mind stripped of barriers But lets not forget their characters Mind is not Brain..more the farrier who shod the hooves of emotions brain is merely the carrier When depression hits…listen to those closest Clear your mind don’t trip …its never hopeless |
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11-07-03, 01:45 PM | #9 | ||||
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Ya It AInt A Thing..
Mine Was Long Too Lets Get Sum Vote Now |
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11-07-03, 02:04 PM | #10 | |||||||
Middle Weight
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i rEaly likled auspitios's verse an i thinjk he won
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11-08-03, 03:36 PM | #11 | ||||||
wanna play doctor????????
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^agreed lol....
fgee's verse was dope...had good imagary n all wit ight flow... good story....was a good 1...but not as good as Aus... i liked aus's style... good flow imagry n a better story i feel... i was jus more into aus's here... vote=aus |
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11-08-03, 11:25 PM | #12 | |||||||
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fgee came nice, as a matta of fact he came nice
as hell BUT i dont think he came with quite enough to overthrow Auspicious. I just think Auspicious's verse was too beautiful, really a nice piece, and the rhyme scheme and everything was really a- mazing. However, both emcees came really well. Congrats to both. vote - auspicious
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11-08-03, 11:26 PM | #13 | |||||||
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oh yea, we need votes on me Vs. Bribeone1
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11-09-03, 03:58 AM | #14 | ||||||
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i have to go with aus ... that was a tight image in head ..
vote= aus |
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11-09-03, 09:58 AM | #15 | ||||||
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bah..
pathetic how theres been so few fucking votes on a championship piece and half those votes are fucking retarded.makes u wonder if u even read the shit another reason why RB's wack.... and ive voted on sureal calda merda and taktiks plus a few others Last edited by fgee : 11-09-03 at 10:28 AM. |
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