your rulez...

8-10 lines max
no dickryde/hate/crew/fan votes
no recycling or biting
verse due 24 hours after thread is made (just in case one of us isn't online when thread is made)

check in

czechin........................................... ....................................

peace
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check one, check two


"the text you have entered is too short, my dick is hanging out blah blah blah...."

Yo Smoka, don't take the 24 hours...

See Profile to understand personals:

Yo check it,

Your crew's Budget matches they Talent, they hired You to Cut Costs
Fuckin knock you out & have that shit standin for ~*I~*Just~*Lost~
Let's Tango, I'll hit you up ruthless and leave you Strangled & Mangled
You Angle-Fishin for a Shark, no wonder your Punch-Lines got Tangled
Yall wanna hit? when I get him Lit, just ask me to Pass it
It's not like I'll get high, I don't smoke Joka's - I just Burn 'em to Ashes
You say Inspiration's ya Occupation, so I'ma give you Some Work
Inspire you to Retire & Expire your Fire when I $pit that Merk
I Stack Knots - from the ones in ya stomach to Crack Spots
I'm 1 up on ya like "777" - and If you got Weed I'ma Jack-Pot

i'll vote when he spitz

"the text you have entered is to.. ah shut up bitch quit riding my nutz".................................................. ..........................................

yo spit.........................can i get an honest vet vote here please????


ill be back when dude drops so i can vote but please vote here

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90779

Don't Get My Punches/Wordplay Or Personals...Don't Vote...Every Line Has It..Catch It!!

I'll Play Basketball In Ur Mouth, Cuz Ur Barely Dribblin Ur Spits??
Ur Revealin U Sick?? Ur The Only Mistake God Was Unwillin To Fix..
H.I.V.? God Wouldnt Bless U Even If U Testified To Sneeze ..(Achoo... God Bless U)
I Murder Ur Dreams, The Only Gang U'll Be Apart Of Is Gangrene..
In This Battle I Take 'Dollar Signs' For No 'Paticular' Reason..($pitacular - $ = pitacular)
Like Empty Dictionaries This Kid's Rhymes Have No Meanin..
U Creepy Bitch!! Stop Goin In My Profile Like Lonely Adults On Yahoo..
Ur Barz Are 'Stretched In More Directions' Than A 'Lesson Of Taboo'..
U Feelin Me? I Beat U So Bad Ur Mom Will Disown U Like Billy Jean..
The Longest Continuous Flow This Bitch Ever Had Is In A Can Of Silly String..

peace
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both were aight but try to see who can get mo creative.
but it looks mo like smoka got dis so far.
either way its not yet good enough to be debated.
show me which is like my dick & knows how to battle hard.

actually this was easy. smoke took this. his punches stood out
more than that of tha other kats.
not a bad a battle, but in the long run, smoke takes it

vote - smoke

Vote Here: Calda Merda vs. Spitit (Dont Forget To Poll)

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yeah, sure is easy when you don't explain your vote.....

"his punches stood out more"

wow, great critique skillz.

^^don't get mad...shit this was a dope battle....lol....i gotta give u props man.....i thought u would extremely suck...lol

peace
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uppin #1................................................ .................................................

peace
4:20

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Good shit.........

Opening-...Smoka..lil funnier
rhymescheme-tie
metaphores-4-5...smoka
finisher-smoka
vocabulary-tie...

Close battle but Moka took it in every way.......good job and work on ya metas........

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=90414

yo hit this...................