10 lines
no crew
no hate
no d/r
u drop first

yo...........dis my checkin.......................... taz checkin cutty.............................

hey dubs sorry that i gotta do this yo

yo dubs you fucked up on your first battle
fuckin yung'n, where's your pacifier grab your rattle
still on your mommy's nipple tryna spit a verse, dont wanna fuck wit u
but u wanna battle so i gotta rip u up an send what's left to the N.I.C.U.
shit i'm dispicable, u in my way so i gotta git rid of u
this rugrat tryna be "all growed up", tha fuck this kid gon do
radio ass nigga i'ma beat u worse than a step-son
belt, switch. extension cord, mic, or T.V. select one
but to me a cinderblock's the best one, what a way to meet Da Beast
Welcome to RB my boy but, your just an appetizer to Da Feast

Next.

[taz u must got a good imagination cause u aint no beast]
[i seen u wanna lose again so u can join my list of deceased]
[If i was 0-1...Taz i wouldnt step to anyone emcee wit skills ]
[cause its worse than no relief after takin subscribtion pills ]
[ur name fits u cause i got ur head spinning wit my lyrics]
[u think u got skills plz the only subject u got me in is generics]
[Taz u like zenia cause u a female warrior but u bout to Lose]
[nigga i will Ko u and to make it fair u can count ur votes by 2's]
[cause ur rhymes are out dated like the root word fo beer.. bose]
[and since i'm a radio nigga this tragedy can be on my radio news]

last line explanation: he called me a radio nigga in his verse

yo i just looked at your status and it says offline what happened i know you aint scared are u?

yo RBers its lookin like he dont wanna spit any body wanna battle send a pm

oh by the way N.I.C.U. (nik-yoo) is the neonatal intensive care unit ICU for newborns
and that radio line was that cuba gooding movie "radio"

Uppin 4 votes
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uppin 4 votes ya'll don't sleep............................................. .........................

stlye/j
flow/j
meta/j
sruc/j
multi/j
wp/j

vote/j
hit up me and 2mindtext>>>>>>>>>>><>>>>><<<<>>>><

if i could vote i would vote for j~dubs

style/ dubs
flow/ dubs
meta/ dubs
struc/ taz
wp/ dubs

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<b><table style=filter:GLOW(color=red)>No sig is fucken needed aiight cunts</table></b>

taz man u need to work on ya delivery and get some harder punches..............J got this wit better punches wordplay flow and creativity


my vote=j

uppin 4 votes
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Dont sleep

J-Dub had better structure word play and metas........I was feelin the first verse too but it was still to basic....................



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