10 lines.....

does 81 stand for the year you were born
or how many times that your asshole's been torn

step to me and i'll fill your ass right up with a shoe
but who knew that your dude just cleaned out your doo doo

on a lyrical scale you're rated a negative one
tryn to get out of the hole, like me with your mum (mom)

you a pussy, you a joke, on the stage you choke
i inhale your lyrics and blow it out my nose like smoke

dek81, it's says you're new to rap battles
but to us you're groud beef still in the form of cattle

PEACE

your turn boi....better have something in here by tonight.....someone hit this post up and leave an honest feedback....i'm up 4-1...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88767

aight just let me get a beat going... aight let's go.....

Who the FUCK is this mc standin in front of me/
Poetictendenceez...more like phonetic disability/
he's choakin like sars victim...someone take away his stage pass/
kid couldn't fuckin rhyme if i stuffed dr. zues up is ASS/
speakers start ta scream n he complains about feedback/
nah ya little bitch thats cus ya voice never cracked/
while other mc's grew up workin on perfectin their tone/
constant suckin on a bone led to ya vocal chord being blow/
oh shit, wtf this guys startin ta pee his damn pants/
only way off the stage is ta built raft frum ya shemale boyfriends implants./

what?

Flow-Dek81
Multies-poetictendenceez
Structur-poetictendenceez
Punchs-Dek81
Personals-poetictendenceez
Volcab-Dek81
Opener-Dek81
Finisher-Dek81
Wordplay-poetictendenceez

Overall-Dek81

Aiight good battle yall but Dek took this 1 today aiight Peace out (v)

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post a link and I'll hit up your stuff with an honest opinoin..ya'll need to stop sleepn so bad tho, for real..uppin 3

aight dek81 took this one with better punchs Vocab and flow the other guy just needs to Elivate big time Peace

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this ain't a tuff decision yall
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drop ya vote n y thread.

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damn this was a good battle
there was some nice shit
can someone visit my battles for feedback and votes
names vs verse112
names vs angellicalr
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Hey yo I can't vote but if I could I think Dek81 tool this shit. Jus barely tho. Nice battle............................................ .................................................. ...........