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ExplicitOT 0 0%
Tek 5 100.00%
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Old 11-12-03, 02:26 PM   #1
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ExplicitOT Vs Tek

IP: 1495 6CD9

Nucca forgot to poll...

10-20 lines

No feedin/recyclin

Dont matter who spit first


Bring heat...
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Old 11-12-03, 02:28 PM   #2
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From: Ottawa(Da moFukin HipHop capital)
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yo i getz to use ma muthafukin verse kid i aint fukin writin anutha verse iight
whats da votin rules
first to 5 votes winz or 3-0 ko
sound good?
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Old 11-12-03, 02:31 PM   #3
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"iight look i already see dis cats shook" explicit grabs da mic
"i guess i drop first"


Now dat im here ~checkin-in~ your gunna b clap clapped n ~wrecked-ma-friend~//
Got no time for yo ~sex-offense~ u lackin self defence again read ya battle you sound like a ~Trans-LesbiaN~//

Call ya self tek time to check ya head n get ~ready~//
U in for da ultimate spit any cat ever heard, dont worry youll ~get-plenty~//

Explicit spit his lyrical clips like spiritual-trips Im aka E-clipz the ~realist-ish~//
You already know you cant ~deal-wit-dis~ im true realness you remind of the ~realist-bitch~//

The only tek u gotz is the tek on ya head when you got ~dropped~//
Dont come to me like lets-b-friends cuz ull get ~popped~//(sorry dis line was short)


~Tha Finisher~

next time kid when u call a batlle u better specify that u a ~lessa-guy~//(lessa=less skill dan me haha)
when it come to testing me youll get ~left-ta-die~ Ill kill any cat that has tha ~chest-to-try~(the heart to try)
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Old 11-12-03, 02:32 PM   #4
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iight now spit summtin
and dont forget i aint been to dis site in like a year or sometin i forget how it works yo
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Old 11-12-03, 03:47 PM   #5
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i'll ripp ya spine, Explicit cant 'handle the tec'....so he gripped the nine,
im never Fair to Rookies, if i smacked Ex in his mouth...ill wet his pussy,

i'll let the tec speak, flip ya technique...u suck so much dick..RB gave u the best beef,
punches go for the headline, wordz already merked u...now ima confirmin the deadline,

son take the sweat off ya palms, if i ever wanted a 'man'...i'd call ya moms,
u winnin?..kodak cant even picture dat, ya verse is a 'classic of pussy'...like da Arista Cats,

me winnins a mystery..i spit clues, u is a inspirin alcoholic...u always get boo's,
what i spit astounds the booth, knucklez like 'loyal servants'...quik to crown ya tooth,

Splicit... ya get nothin bu disrespect from ya own fans,while i spit toxins from throat glands,
ya dad forced you to take the cock...and thats the only time ya ever 'beat a grown man',

I mean...iv been ill since ya started....rippin me? how could you think that?
fuck ya 'small time lyrics' its synthetic material...more like 'shrink rap',

Unstable in your position your 'net' career was designed to 'break falls'
Ex...you vs me is like 'the last shot in pool'...your 'behind the 8 ball',

Ya overacted...tek spits corrosive acids wit the coldest tactics...
your into men and feminim... so ill 'bend ya limbs' like yoga classes,

YOUR WEAK ASS VERSE TEK? Ha! Nobody felt urs... your useless...
till you 'run blind thru record stores' and 'lose yaself in the music'... lol
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Old 11-12-03, 03:54 PM   #6
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Uppn for votes... drop a link an i'll peep ur battle...

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Old 11-12-03, 04:23 PM   #7
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WOW EXTREMELY STRETCHED BARS FROM BOTH.....GOOD FLOW BUT C'MON

PUNCHES=TEK
SUSTAINMENT=TEK
ORIGANALITY=BOTH
CREATIVITY=TEK
FLOW=BOTH...LITTLE
PERSONALS=TEK
OVERALL=TEK....JUS GAVE MORE

MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT UP MA BATTLE WITH DACURSE IN MA SIG..PZ
 
Old 11-12-03, 04:32 PM   #8
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Tru... i jus got carried away tryin to mix the style up a bit... nah mean?


Uppn this ish...


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Old 11-12-03, 05:04 PM   #9
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Tek took every catagory worth mentioning.

Even shitty format. LOL!

Ya getting two lines and forcing them into one.

It fucks up ya rhyme scheme cuz the last words don't rhyme at all.
You rhymed them within one line.
Still comes out ok.
Seriously, I used ta do the exact same thing.
S-t-r-e-t-c-h-e-d as hell and rhyme within the same line.

But I elevated.

You will too.

I can't figure out if Ex is dissing you or Tha Realist.

He mentions the name a couple of times..

Weak punches, not much wordplay and no personals came outta Ex's rhyme.

Direct your punches, use shit in his sig or his name to personalize it some.

Just try harder to insult. Pretend he's right in front of ya.

Peace
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Old 11-12-03, 05:17 PM   #10
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V. tru.... appreciate constructive critiscism... props dawg.

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Old 11-17-03, 09:21 AM   #11
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Old 11-19-03, 01:10 PM   #12
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[SIZE=8]Ao... uppn this ish mayn...


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Old 11-22-03, 08:02 AM   #13
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drop a link an i'll hit ur battle up...

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Old 11-22-03, 09:39 AM   #14
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yo Tek took this easily in every way

punches were harder
personals nailed
his verse was much more creative

vote: tek
 
Old 11-22-03, 11:11 AM   #15
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From: Bermy
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Yo, some nice punches, jsut the bars were a lil stretched and some forced mulites. Both of you had good punches. I think tek edged this one out cuz he had more material and better flowing punches. Try not 2 type in bold 24/7 seems "newbish"

Vote: tek

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