you too slow..ima spit in a min

aiight...................... edit though my name is Explict not Explicit.......................................... .................................................. .....

sorry my computer froze, well prolly have to red o thsi lata, here's my verse thoughExplictly sickening
comin at me wit your petty bitch bickerin
matter of fact im figurin, you only online spittin, cause u ain't take your ritalin
prolly searchin the net, porn sites, xxx
chokin your chicken neck
like "shit did i get it yet!?"
screwen your c drive
downloadin your semen
fly down on your levis
that r kelly tape got u fiendin
you ain't just a porno freak
you a wanna be wigga, fake jigga mc
what elsei gotta say, the battle is won
go write soem code for your diskette drive's son

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<center>HemiSphere
The Write Side Of Your Mind</center>

|| I make a bitch of fellaz, when it comes to dissin issues ||
|| eyo, u trip like cinderella, low-budget baller, missin his shoe ||
|| After this you'll be knocked out of the game, its a shame, ||
|| but unfortunetly your verses are lame, i'll aim ||
|| for your brain to change your mind frame (frame of mind) ||
|| to the right one, like mine, i design lines combine rhymez ||
|| this is a warning by means of divine signs ||
|| my lyrics are linked to writings that are holy ||
|| i can block all the shit you kick like a goalie ||
|| attached with a high powered force field ||
|| by the time im done your flaws will be revealed, ||
|| Check the whole dialect the sharpness will cut your neck ||
|| leave you bleedin on the corner and exhalin your final ||
|| breathe. ||
|| why didn't you realize it was done with all disrespect ||
|| when i had your b!tch ass in a Lab with a scapold ready to ||
|| disect. ||
|| I'm 'raisin' the roof like convertible tops or grapes on solar ||
|| panels in the sun ||
|| Got you on the 'run' like Fat Joe after the death of Big Pun ||

uppin for some votes ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

even though sublimes structure needs work i'd vote for him cus he had sum hard concepts...but sub...take a little more time n the hits could be real hard.

explicit u had sum ok shit but a lot of the lines were lame....ok wordplay but i wasn't feelin the heat.

my battle:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=91172

uppin for honest votes (2) .................................................. .................................................. ............................

explicit go tthis by haf his verse just betta flow, punches, metas------sublime had sum aight content but i wasn't feelin the flow wutsoever or the concepts really just needs to elevate---

vote=explicit

peep my battle's out in the sig thanx

explict takes mi vote for his Punches, flow,Metas and Structure

Sublime u need some work on ya punches and i wasnt really feelin ya in that verse so Peace Out Yall (v)


Vote- Explict

Hey yo I can't vote yet but if I could I'd give it ti Explict. He had a much smother flow. Some nice Metas too. Sublime, you gotta spit on more than one topic to keep people interested

thanks to those who voted ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Uppin (3) for some more votes............................................. .........................

this is my 4th time uppin for votes.....................we it aint all that hard yalll .....common now wee need some honest votes...........................

yep..................
punches=ex
sustainment=ex
flow=ex
struc=ex
overall=ex

you surprised me....
you did aight here
played concepts but how wud ya know
pz

MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91565

Thanks for the vote Brix.......apriciate it.................i'll check your battlle in a min............................................... ..........................................